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STEMkid   
Nov 3, 2014
Essays / I want to work for Google (do cool things that matter) - NEED GUIDANCE ON COLLEGE ESSAY [2]

This is the topic :
Florida Tech's location maximizes students' ability to explore careers, gain work experience and conduct research with faculty in their major of interest. How would you take advantage of these opportunities?

I really don't know how to attack this essay, I wrote a few openings and they're all ridiculously terrible, can someone please aid me in my problem? A little about myself if you need that, I'm applying for computer sciences, I want to work for google (do cool things that matter)... If someone can help me I'd appreciate it!
STEMkid   
Nov 9, 2014
Graduate / My intellectual passion is in the computer sciences. Florida Tech Essay [2]

[b]Florida Tech's location maximizes students' ability to explore careers, gain work experience and conduct research with faculty in their major of interest. How would you take advantage of these opportunities?

My intellectual passion is in the computer sciences. As I was arbitrating which AICE courses to take in my junior year, I pondered about what I want to do in the future. I tried to imagine myself in ten years, trying to see where I would be, and what I would be doing. For a whole good month, I was in utter incertitude. Then, one day I decided I'd ask one of my Embry-Riddle professors to guide me towards a field I would enjoy. My immediate question was, "What profession is extremely fun that involves engineering?" in which he responded with, "You have a passion for computers, it is very likely that you will be in that field, I suggest computer sciences.

At that moment, I researched for days about computer sciences; enough to where I could write multiple papers, I had realized computer sciences is where my career will be. As a student at FIT learning computer sciences, I will apply myself to take apart of internship opportunities and work with others in creating any technology that can benefit the world. Having the opportunity to take apart of internships at major firms such as Microsoft, would definitely exploit my passion to be a computer scientist. When I ruminate about being a computer scientist, it prompts me of a quote by Confucius: "Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life." FIT will catalyze my passion to be a computer scientist.

Are there any errors? How does this essay seem? I'm a high school student with college credit if you're wondering about the embry riddle thing...
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