Writing Feedback / Some people suggest the non-essential use of aircraft like international travel should discourage [3]

I will be highly obliged if someone could give some common on my writing. I knew there are many mistake on grammar and structure, but I couldn't figure it out.

Aircraft uses more fuel than cars and produces more pollution. some people suggest the non-essential use of aircraft like international travel should be discouraged. Do you agree or disagree?

Traveling offers an opportunity broaden people horizons and recognize about different countries and also cultures. If people are traveling to foreign countries without aircraft or using other transport, it would be caused many inconvenience. However, aircraft can be produced more pollution than other transport and some people suggest tourists are not essentially using aircraft and should be discouraged. In this essay, I would like to discuss the influence of taking aircraft in various demands.

In my personal opinion, tourists are imperatived to take aircraft when they are going to foreign countries, because it waste considerable amount of time to use other transport and it may take much more expenditure on their journey, however, I believe there are chemical substances in fuel for waste gas treatment.

In addition, airplanes offer the tourist a sense of travelling comfort and satisfaction. They also guarantee passenger arrive destination on time and report destinations' weather and news to satisfy their various demands.

However, the influence of pollution over environment should not be ignored. If we do not confess that our planet is our home, we will never be able to take adequately care of it.

Letters / Waiter position - job application letter General Writing IELTS TASK 1 [4]

You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.

Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.

You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Mr. Moore

I am writing to apply your advertisement on your website for a waiter position and I will provide my relevant working experience.

I am currently a university student and am going to university during the day time. Therefore I am suitable for this job and very keen to apply in this position and I do have experience in food and beverage. The previous restaurant I worked call TOP ONE which is a Chinese restaurant locate at Brisbane's CBD. My mainly experiences in cashier assistant, dish Deliverer and administrative, also I have been working in this restaurant for eight months and because I went to overseas in my university term break for three months so they hire someone else on my position. I will be able to provide my previous manager reference detail on my CV.

My suitable working time is on Wednesday to Sunday from 4 P.M to 11 P.M and I might only working for two nights a week during exam period on June. If this schedule is not suitable in your restaurant, we could talk about it in interview.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully

Peter wong