Posts by greenw4y
Name: Thanh Nguyen
Joined: Jul 27, 2015 |
Last Post: Aug 4, 2015
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From: Viet Nam
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Do you think a professional stager's job is interesting? Could you do it? Why or why not. [3]
Topic: Do you think a professional stager's job is interesting? Could you do it? Why or why not. (5-8 sentences)In my opinion, a professional stager's job is very interesting. I think I could do that job because of many reasons. First, I am a well-ordered person. From my point of view, this is the most important character to be a professional stager. Furthermore, I am a creative person. With this character, I think I could make the house look more beautiful and unique. In a word, this interesting job is worth to try.
P.S. Please help me check this paragraph. Is there any mistake? Is it well-structured?
Thank you :"3 Undergraduate /
Think about the person you admire. What qualities does that person have that are admirable? [4]
My suggestion :)
The person I admire is my father. Diligence made him the man I revered and admire most. My father works silently and hard day by day without complaining. Moreover, my father is a brave man, but his fears are very different, they revealed a lot about his bravery. As he grows older, his health condition worsened and his body becomes weaker, but all these things make him more persistent to support our family. In a word, diligence and bravery are the qualities that I immensely admired in my father.
Good luck!
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Topic: When you have to solve a creative problem, do you rely more on craft or inspiration? Why? [3]
Topic: When you have to solve a creative problem, do you rely more on craft or inspiration? Why? (5-8 sentences)When I have to solve a creative problem, I rely more on inspiration. From my point of view, an ordinary problem can be solved by craft, which we learn from school or from predecessors. Meanwhile, a creative problem is always solved in a creative way. The creative problem will never be mentioned in any books so that the solution to these problems also will never be in books. In that case, the only way to solve the problem is to create a new solution - rely on inspiration. In brief, I do rely more on inspiration when I have to solve a creative problem.
P.S. I was very confused when write this sentence: "In that case, the only way to solve the problem is to create a new solution - rely on inspiration"
My exact idea is: "In that case, the only way to solve the problem is to create a new solution, it means to rely on inspiration", but I'm afraid that it's not a good sentence, so I use the hyphen =))). Is it correct when I put a hyphen there? =(((
Please help me check this paragraph? Are there any mistakes? Is it well-structured?
Thank you ! :"3
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