Writing Feedback / Excerpt Meaning from I Have a Dream Speech [3]

Martin Luther King Jr. had an amazing life that spanned over three decades. One of King's most famous speeches is "I Have a Dream." In it, King describes his vision for the United States. Also he fought racism for the sake of harmony and never fights injustice with violence. He is very understand, the violence will only lead to a new oppression. He is able to put himself in a situation where the level of one's judgment is not based on his success alone, but also based on its success to live with others. He is aware of black people longing to be a peace and equality to a true independence where independence to be achieved black people in America in the form of self-liberation that can change their lives. I Have a Dream speech has become considered the most touching in the struggle and the speech that opened the hearts of everyone that there is no boundary between blacks and whites people.

Writing Feedback / South Sudan Works to Rebuild Higher Education [4]

South Sudan is the latest country in the world after the referendum which the majority of southern Sudanese voted for independence from the government of Sudan. South Sudan very poor from the area of half a million square meters only fifty kilometers good road, almost no public electrical power or other basic systems. The majority of population cannot read or write (more than 80%). There are only two universities which the seventy-five percent of the lecturers come from Sudan and they could not teach in Southern Sudan. The solution for this condition, the government of South Sudan asked for their lecturer were abroad to return. They request to teach a wide range of knowledge and skills practice like carpentry, making bricks, micro-financing, and also small agriculture. Only four percent of good land in South Sudan is being farmed. While more one millions of people need food aid to survive. One of higher education which is ready to develop the knowledge and skills farming is University of Juba.