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Posts by mawahi bussalam [Suspended]
Name: salam
Joined: Sep 13, 2016
Last Post: Sep 19, 2016
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mawahi bussalam   
Sep 13, 2016
Writing Feedback / The logging industry supplies the raw materials for array of products [2]

Ilts summary moths; environmental impacts of logging

The logging industry suplies the raw materials for array of products.however,this is without untold harm to the environment.the damage include habitat loss,pollution,and climate change,with the effects spanning the globe from rainforestof central Africa ,southeast asia and south America to northern forests of Canada and Scandinavia.

the form of life was divided to be two both are terrestrial and aquatic which will become endangered as forests vanish .terrestrial is the animal or plant lives in the land and aquatic is the kind of animal or plant lives in the water. Logging can demage in the terrestrial or either .one the other hand ,it can also damage array of animals in underground and other wildlifes

All of that ,the logging forest is one vital of sciene which has to avoid because it can due to various sides feeled down .furthermore ,it becomed victim.
mawahi bussalam   
Sep 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / The incredible trips of Bird Migration [4]

Hello mem 77 it nice to see your comment and there is word that has to be corrected . example : "more good" .the correct word is" better" because that it includes comparative degree
mawahi bussalam   
Sep 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / The ability to stay focused positively relates to the quality of athlete's performance [2]

IELTS SUMMARY MONTH: PERIPHERAL VISION IN SPORTS

Athlete's focus is the one of the most important effect on their perfomance.It can achieve something of what they want maximumly by focus. The athlete must be kneely aware of what happens all around them .

Athlete's performance depends on training visual abilities.Not jus they rely on their muscles or incredible abilities belong to them. The athlete also focuses or detectes all kinds of motion from the angle and never lose concentration and numerous kinds of distraction for athletes . For example ,for volleyball player must be attention to body positioning in relation to the speed and angle of the moving ball as well as to the court boundaries

In summary, the athlete focus is very vital because it can impact all of athlete working ways and always keeping on track many times to be professional athlete
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