oktoberlin12
Oct 10, 2016
Writing Feedback / Studying the past and reasons requiring us to know about history [3]
Hai Halin!
... two main reasonsrequiringwhich are requiring us to know about history. First of all, when the young people/ youngters[choose one] are reminded of majestic ...
If students are not educated by the history, there will ...
... in jeopardy due to children lacking ofhistorichistorical comprehension.
... plays an important roleintonations' existencethe existence of nations,.[use dot]as As a result, it is crucial ...
... to generalize history to the young people/ youngters in particular and ...
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I think your essay is well-written and well-structured, started from Introduction, Overview, Body and Conclusion.
I think you did a great job Halin!
Hope this would help you.
Hai Halin!
... two main reasons
If students are not educated by the history, there will ...
... in jeopardy due to children lacking of
... plays an important role
... to generalize history to the young people/ youngters in particular and ...
Note
I think your essay is well-written and well-structured, started from Introduction, Overview, Body and Conclusion.
I think you did a great job Halin!
Hope this would help you.