Writing Feedback / The majority of people moved to some big cities from their hometown to have a good condition to live [4]

Writing Task 2: The advantages and disadvantages to being a people in a small village

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Nowadays, the majority of people moved to a big cities from their hometown to have a good condition to live. Comparison with the past, there were advantages and disadvantages to being a people in a small village.

I think there were three main benefits when living in a small village. Firstly, when you lived in a small community you were never fell lonely because people knew each other and everyone usually spoke to each other. Secondly, the streets were safe, and people there were little crime because people there did not have material needs so much. So children were able to go out to play with other in safe. Also, children have a lot of friend to play with in the same village, so they learned social skills.

However, there were a number of disadvantages. There were a few schools there, so children had to go very far if they wanted to get a high education. So that there were lots of children had to work in agriculture instead of going to school. Also, when someone was ill, they had to move a long way to the nearest hospital.

In my opinion. I think living in a small village is suitable with my grandparents, because they were safer, happier and never lonely. However, in the modern world, there are more advantages when living in modern big cities.

Writing Feedback / ..it's hard to live without it.. The advantages and disadvantages of the invented computer; [3]

Nowadays, people go along with the efficient of human have significantly increased from the past as a result of the computer was invented. With the development of computer technology, there are a variety of new technologies were invented. However, besides various benefits, there are some disadvantages as well.

First of all, it is impossible to memorize all of the human's without untold current knowledge even it is still significantly growing, but the invented computer has effectively solved this problem for us. Moreover, thanks to the excellent data and algorithms solving, it is able to help people finish a huge number of works within just a few seconds. Also, the sensitive control of computer technology make our life be easier and easier. For example, it created lots of improving in hospital industry helping people again from recently diseases with no cure. And there are many robots helping people so much were discovered by computer technology.

However, that also exists a few disadvantages. In my view, the biggest problem is developing computer will delete a lot of jobs operated by human. A various of technologies were invented to replace human to get a higher effective and smaller labor costs. It make the unemployment is more and more popular particularly developing and undeveloped countries because at that time if you want to get a job, you will be required to get very high qualifications. However, there are a few works that computer cannot do, it is make a piece of artwork because only the special meticulous man can create unique products.

To sum up, computer bring us many advantages and in contemporary society, it is hard to live without it. In the other way, it also have bad effects with many countries and many people.

Writing Feedback / Using the Internet to communicate have changed our lives [2]

Nowadays, there are more and more people usually use the Internet to communicate, so it have changed our lives a lot. However, it is not at all certain that this make our social lives worse as a result. In many ways, there are some good aspects as well.

Long time ago, people communicated with friends via telephone, fax or letter. And also they used to visited their friends or relatives as long as they had time. And nowadays, people usually use Internet communicate. for instant, when someone's birthday, everyone came together and celebrated his or her birthday. They felt closer. Unlike modern people, they usually send greetings through social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter, Gmail.....In my opinion, this is meaningless. Although they have lots at birthday greetings, but they still feel lonely. Moreover, when the social networking sites were developed, people were less interested in each other, they always hold the cellphone in hand, and immersed in a virtual world.

However, the advent of internet also helps our life better. We have more friends, can know what are they thinking, how they look, what are they doing and the changes of the world. The communication becomes easier and more convenience than ever. People can study, run business, meet their friends without leaving home. As a result, our social relationship is extended.

On the other hand, the modern life makes people too busy. They don't have enough time to care about everything around. They are rushing to do their job, so people no longer see each other much anymore. That's why we should not blame modern forms of communication for decreasing the time people spend seeing their friends.

In conclusion as far as I concerned, people feel happier now, modern communication has improved our social life. However, we need to make sure that we should not be addicted to the social networking sites.