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Posts by nurul66
Name: Nurul Fitria
Joined: Nov 10, 2016
Last Post: Nov 14, 2016
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From: Indonesia
School: UNDIP

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nurul66   
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / To find work you love, don't follow your passion. TED 12 How could we choose a fulfilling career? [2]

To find work you love, don't follow your passion

When talking about career, interest or passion will be main consideration to think as this would determine our happiness when undertaking our job. However, it is not easy to be taken as many choices come and make the individual confused. With regard to this phenomenon, how could we choose a fulfilling career? There is an organization that is dedicated to analyze this question called '80000 hours'. This organization did research about how to make a real career decision and finally concluded that all this time, people focus on the wrong thing. Basically, everyone does a career based on parent's career, money to get, and passion. But passion is imbalance with career that everyone gets. The solution is doing what's valuable that consist of achievement and meaning. Achievement means getting good something. Meaning or purpose means trying to do something great. The methods are exploring, building skill, and solving pressing problems.
nurul66   
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / Dark Chocolate Reaps Heart-Healthy Benefits [6]

Hai @mem77, these are suggestion for your writing

Based on this article (you can mention the title of article)

there isare two ways that dark chocolate protectivecan protect human body against heart disease. (Protective is adjective, there is no verb in the sentence)

The first one is that it restores flexibility to stiffening arteriesof the arteries from stiffening

it has an organic compound called flavanol which is good for humans' heart.
nurul66   
Nov 10, 2016
Writing Feedback / Does the rising popularity of telecommuting affect society's lives? IELTS writing Task 2 [3]

To begin with, the uplifting interest of telecommuting [...] of living with the new trends. (you have done great, yet you have to give specific example to strengthen your statement by using 5W1H)

Due to the familiarising of technology, the detrimental impact ...(What does the mean of familiarising of technology?, please give explanation)
nurul66   
Nov 10, 2016
Writing Feedback / Getting new knowledge from book is good choice. TED 13 Why I read a book a day [2]

TED 13 Why I read a book a day

Everyone wants a good life, but they don't know hot to get it or just do as they want. There are 5 rules that they have to follow or we called it 'design of life'. 5 rules are finding the mentor, humble, preserve, reading a book, and thinking top enough. First to find the mentor, we have to look outside and learn the knowledge from everywhere. We can see and take their strategy/knowledge to be a success person. Everyone can be your mentor, like teacher, parents, or friend. The second is being humble person. Don't be cocky and make a good relation with others. The third rule, preserver. Fourth is reading a book. Getting new knowledge from book is good choice. One book a week. The last is thinking top enough. If we do the rules, it can be easier to get a good life.
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