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Name: Bryan Henry
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adventureabroad   
Mar 4, 2017
Scholarship / Nothing is impossible. Follow-On Service Project for Study Abroad Scholarship [2]

1. Briefly outline your proposed project to promote the Gilman Scholarship and international education. How will this project impact your home university or home community? What are your project goals?

2. What is your target population and how will your project impact this group?

3. How will you integrate the impact of your experiences abroad into your project?

4. What, if any, campus departments, student organizations, and/or community organizations will you collaborate with in promoting the Gilman Scholarship and international education? Have you already made contact with these groups?


Follow-on project



My follow-on service project to promote the Gilman Scholarship and International Education will consist of making students of color aware of the benefits and impact of studying abroad. In a study done by National Association of Foreign Student Advisers: Association of International Educators, only 6% of students who studied abroad during 2014-2015 were African American. I know first-hand that the ability to see the world from a different perspective has the power to innovate the minds of others. The value of an international education is incomparable to regular instruction. I have had the wonderful opportunity to share my experiences with my community and expand their horizons of the world. Building upon this, I am confident that upon returning from France I can continue my outreach to underrepresented students.

My proposed project would consist of an outreach campaign that will have two overlapping phases: videos and campus outreach. First, I plan to video blog my experience on YouTube. Every week I will make a video highlighting what I have done, and one thing I learned during that time. These videos will be targeted towards minority students, specifically African Americans, who are interested in studying in not only France, but abroad in general. In addition, I will track my French language skills from beginning to end. It is imperative for students and others watching that my experience is not just about going to the country, but also immersing myself and studying the culture. Furthermore, I plan to explain how I am spending my money and give pointers on how to budget for studying abroad. Because I had the opportunity of studying abroad before, I realize some common mistakes that can be made such as not applying for more scholarships and wasting money on items not needed. For questions that people may have on a video, they can input them into the comments section, and I can make a video explaining my answer. Because there are not many video testimonials of minorities studying abroad, I am hopeful that sharing my experiences will motivate those who wish to achieve this goal.

Secondly, another way of promoting international education to minorities would be in conjunction with organizations on my campus and communities nearby. Being in the Minority Advisement Program, I work with different organizations such as the Black Student Alliance and the Multicultural Student Center. These clubs are put in place for minority students to have a voice and a safe space to interact with others who share similar problems and experiences such as discrimination and culture differences. My goal upon returning from my study abroad would be to hold a group informational session where students in these organizations can come to learn about international education, and discuss how they can afford it. In a powerpoint that I put together I can go over statistical evidence of the impact of study abroad, and the long term benefits it has on students. These benefits include higher chance of job placement post-graduation, better chance of adaptability in the work environment, as well as higher average starting salaries.

I plan to work closely with the director at the Office of International Studies at my school during and after my time abroad. With her assistance in this presentation, she can give students reassurance on affording study abroad by providing information on scholarships and different opportunities. I will open this presentation by telling about how I was able to afford and accomplish studying abroad twice to Canada and France, and share some my best and worst moments. In addition, I will explain how I was able to adapt to a different culture, and provide my viewpoint of being a black student abroad. Speaking with past minority students who have also studied abroad, I can ask them to share their experiences so students can get an array of distinct testimonials. Included in this powerpoint will be a slide dedicated to the Gilman Scholarship. On this slide will provide details such as how to apply, requirements, and due dates. This presentation will be given mid to late January to give time to weigh options and apply for scholarships. Furthermore, although I have begun speaking with these organizations and my director, I will reach out to them 2-3 months prior to my return to schedule a proper date that works for everyone. I am confident my efforts will ensure students feel more comfortable about making the decision on an international education.

It is a goal of most students to study abroad, and from my follow-on service project I want students to realize that it can be achieved no matter how impossible it may seem. I believe an international education should not be a luxury, but rather becoming an almost essential part of an education in the 21st century. From a minority's perspective, seeing others who come from a similar background achieve something most do not is inspirational. It makes them feel they can do anything they set their mind to. Aside from promoting diversity, this is my biggest goal from my proposal. I love that I can be an inspiration to others, and that my experiences can be a catalyst for their dreams and aspirations. I am happy that my efforts can influence others one conversation at a time. From my experiences abroad last semester, I was able to assist a friend of mine in studying abroad this year to Austria. It was amazing to know that I helped them achieve this, and they now have the opportunity to influence someone else. With the help of the Gilman Scholarship, I am able to live my dream and help other students pursue theirs. That is the greatest thing I could ask for.

Thanks so much!
adventureabroad   
Mar 4, 2017
Scholarship / The contribution of your study to your future career [3]

@bagusetyawan

Hey @bagusetyawan,

I'm not sure your writing prompt, so I'll just help you grammatically. Your essay flows well.

... able to understanding more about ...

... person who is involved in policy and regulations making in making policies and regulations, of which requires (...) meet current situation[al] needs in the field.

Some of the courses offered ...

Hope this helps!
adventureabroad   
Feb 20, 2017
Scholarship / 500 WORD ESSAY EXPLAINING WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN FRANCE! [6]

@Holt
Thank you so much for the feedback Holt! I really really appreciate it. I know you're getting a bit annoyed with my essays, and I apologize! This is the last one. I think I like this one :)'

I have always lived by the phrase "You can do anything you can put your mind to", but I never realized how important that statement would be until now. When I accomplished my biggest goal of studying abroad in Canada for the fall semester, it sparked a passion in me that was for so long wanted and needed. Although I always knew I loved to travel, I did not have much opportunities to do so before college. Being in Canada allowed me to step out of comfort zone, meet people from different cultures, and expand my horizons on the world. Never would I have imagined that in just four months I could experience so much growth in myself. Before my exchange, it was difficult for me to start conversations. Often times I would hesitate to talk with people who were different. However, my experiences there made me realize my desire for intercultural communication. Thus, I aspire to travel the globe to experience new cultures and see the world from a different perspective.

For the fall 2017 semester, I have chosen to study in France at Aix-Marseille Universite, in the city of Aix-en-Provence. Through the International Student Exchange Program, I am able to delve myself into French culture and language. Because Aix-en-Provence is a small town and not a touristic city, it allows me to be fully immersed and surrounded by French people. This will help me in learning the language and getting accustomed to the culture. In addition, the location of the city allows me to travel the country easily to see all that France has to offer.

Traveling to France has been a goal of mine for many years. However, when I discovered that I had the chance to study there, I knew I couldn't pass up the opportunity. While in Canada I had the chance to visit Quebec City, where for the first time in my life I was surrounded by people who spoke a different language. Although this was new to me, I became reluctant to put my small knowledge of French greetings and gestures to good use. In those moments, I felt more grateful than ever. To be able to converse, even in the smallest ways, with people of a different culture made me feel a sense of gratitude. In spite of the fact that Quebec and France are different, I desire to learn more of the language and immerse myself in the interesting and fascinating culture.

France has always stood out to me because of the diverse culture and and great education system. Diversity is important to me and I find France appealing in the fact that, like America, it is a rather inclusive country that has huge influence from others. I had the chance to speak with French students from different ethnicities in Canada. It was amazing how even though they were different in the way they looked, they had great pride in where they were from. As a finance major who wants to go into international business, this exchange will be beneficial in teaching me to adapt to surroundings and preparing me for the globalized economy. I hope to one day move overseas to work as a business developer for startup companies moving into foreign markets. Studying abroad will assist me in this by helping me communicate with those of different backgrounds.

I have aligned my goals and aspirations for opportunities like these. Working diligently these past few years, much of what I have done has been for this moment. Accomplishing a goal that I have had for so long makes me feel a sense of pride and empowerment. I hope to gain from this experience a greater sense of cultural awareness, a better understanding of the world, as well as adaptability skills that will be beneficial to me in the future.
adventureabroad   
Feb 20, 2017
Scholarship / 500 WORD ESSAY EXPLAINING WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN FRANCE! [6]

@Holt
Hey Holt, so I decided to write some of it over again. What do you think? I'm stuck at this point. My essay is due in a couple days, but I can't seem make this more thoughtful and creative. In this exchange, I won't be studying my major, finance. I am going to immerse myself in the culture.
adventureabroad   
Feb 20, 2017
Student Talk / How to train the speaking ability without partner? [27]

Hey Aurora,

I know how it feels to really want to learn a new language, I am learning to speak French and it definitely is difficult when someone isn't there to help you. However, some tips I find that useful that might be for you too are:

1. Find tv shows and movies in English that you might interest you and watch with the subtitles of your native language. It'll help with getting the phonetics, and hearing it more and more will make it easier for you to say the words.

2. For songs that you really like listening to in your language, find the translation to them in English. Since it's a song that you like, more than likely it's stuck in your head after you listen to it. By translating it to english you will learn words easily, and build your vocabulary.

3. Read read read! For books that you love, try to find it in the English version.
4. I use duolingo, you should try it. Although I'm learning a lot more just by watching french videos on youtube, duolingo helps with just getting started.

I hope this helps, good luck!
adventureabroad   
Feb 16, 2017
Scholarship / 500 WORD ESSAY EXPLAINING WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN FRANCE! [6]

Hello, I am applying for a scholarship through my school to study in France for the fall semester. The prompt is to write a 500 word essay on why I want to study abroad. Please let me know what you think about what I have written so far.

human interaction and meeting others



Studying abroad the fall 2016 semester in Canada helped spark a passion in me that was for so long needed and wanted. Never would I have imagined stepping out my comfort zone and putting myself in another surrounding lead to some of the best experiences of my life. From the amazing people I met and beautiful places that I visited, to the growth in myself that I experienced, my time abroad has acted as a catalyst to my other dreams and aspirations. I am no longer the kid who was once scared to start conversations with people who looked different. Rather, I am the now young man who is keen for human interaction and meeting others.

As a result of this experience, I have chosen to pursue an exchange program in France, at Aix-Marseille Universite in Aix-en-Provence. Through the International Student Exchange program partnership with my school,________, I am able to immerse myself in French culture as well as learn and explore the rich history that France has to offer. In addition to being situated between the beautiful French alps and Mediterranean coast, Aix-Marseille is a ranked French university and one of the most distinguished in the country.

I have yearned for the opportunity to travel to France. In high school, I was fortunate to have the chance to speak with other minorities who went abroad to the country. These students, who came from a similar background of mine, spoke highly of the diversity of the country and the education they received. To many, it was their first taste of what life was outside of America. I remember first hand the story of a black male, similar to me, who told of how his experience made him see the world differently. With every sentence he spoke, I could feel his excitement of what he had accomplished. From being able to immerse himself in a culture so different from his own, to living a rather simplistic life, I felt eager to learn more about his and other's experiences.

From that day on, I aligned my goals and aspirations for this opportunity. Working diligently these past few years, much of what I have done has been for this moment. To be able to accomplish a goal that I have had for so long makes me feel a sense of gratitude and empowerment. I hope to gain from this experience a greater sense of cultural awareness, a better understanding of the world, as well as adaptability skills that will be beneficial to me in the future.
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