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Name: baljinder gill
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Jun 21, 2017
Writing Feedback / A movie that has inspired you and its impact on your life. Problem in usage and convention - CBEST [3]

"Tare Zameen Par" movie



We get inspired by the things we come in contact with in our daily life. A film that has inspired me a lot, was a movie I watched two years ago. It was a movie named "Tare Zameen Par" , which means little stars on earth. It is about the life of a special child "Eric" with learning disability. The movie is inspirational for future teachers. The movie shows what a kid with disability has to face just because he thinks differently.

The story shows how his parents, friends and even teachers treat Eric because he has no interest in studies. Although he tried to learn, and focus, but he failed. It was the emotional scene of the movie and even I cried that what a little guy is going through. Everyone in his contact is expecting beyond his abilities. No one even tries to understand him and his feelings. Everyone is checking his limits by bullying him, however he get use to it and it does not seem effecting him anymore. He starts living in his own world and then stops going to school. Eric starts spending his time with nature , without thinking the consequences of his action.

One day a new teacher comes to his class and notices about his disabilities. He takes an initiative to get closer to the Eric and become his friend . Finally, he get to know about his hidden talent . The teacher got shocked when he sees his art drafts. He encourage him to take part in art competition. With teacher's encouragement and his hard work he won that competition. Suddenly he become star of the day and get popular among school kids. The teacher brings his confidence back and also secure his future.That was the clicking point, I learnt that a teacher can make a difference in students life. That is why the teachers are called nation builders. At that moment, I decided to become a teacher and wanted to make children life better.

I believe that education can change a vision to see children with disabilities. There should be more movies like this, so that people get knowledge out of it. The school boards need to introduce such things in their curriculum, it will benefit students and of course teachers as well. In that way this planet will be more livable place for all of us without any discrimination. The more we get educated, less will be such kind of ignorance.One has to see a child beyond the labels as a human being and each kid deserves to be loved.
baljinder   
Jun 20, 2017
Writing Feedback / Explain any risk you have taken in your life. Cbest level essay. [3]

Take risk or stay in place



It is hard to believe that the successful people have not taken any risk at any point of their lives.Search for their stories, we all will be amazed that they have taken extraordinary risks to follow their dreams.To achieve your goals, you have to stay focus, and calm. You need to be on your toes to attain your aim. I consider myself a risk taker, but the biggest risk I have taken was when I passed my high school. I followed my dreams and went against my parent's wish to become a doctor. I excelled in studies, so my parents wanted me to pursue my career in medical line.

I had no interest in science, although I was good in it. I chose math as my major and told my parents about my decision. They were furious and worried about my future.They offered me financial help if I choose science, but I refused their offer. I was excited about my decision but also had second thought sometimes in my mind.

It was really hard when I actually faced the real world . In the beginning, I had to face time management problems and the circumstances was not quite in my favor. I started regretting my decision. I had to work and study all by my own. Then I read many books on the struggle of the successful and famous people and that helped me a lot. I controlled myself and put my efforts in studies and work. I work even harder in my studies.

Finally, I graduated from my college. I was in the toppers. I still remember, I called my parents about my achievement and they were happy and appreciated my hard work and concentration to achieve my aim.I felt so relaxed and proud that I can not explain in words .That was the best day of my life.I learnt valuable lesson of my life that risk taking seems hard but the lessons you can learn out of your struggle will make you a better person and a good human being.

In conclusion, I would say nothing is impossible. All you have to do is take risks, set your goals, and stay focus.Hard work is key of success It is perfectly fine if you fail in your first attempt, just do not lose hope and keep trying. After ten years, you are only going to regret on the things you have not done instead of your failures.
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