Posts by nhantran

nhantran

Aug 30, 2017

Writing Feedback / [IELTS WRITING TASK 2]: A gap year between school and university [5]

I'm quite confused with some words. I'm not sure but you can check once again.
1."whether it benefits students or not.... has caused," i think there is a missing word there.
2."This is because they are still immature person" i though it should be "people"
3. "especially those in Africa, to support the residents there "
If I'm wrong, please disregard this comment

nhantran

Aug 29, 2017

Writing Feedback / Writing task 1: the percentage of female members of parliament of euroupean countries [4]

Hi. I just don't know how to say thank you. I'm learning IELTS by myself at the moment and there is no one showing me these things before. I will keep your advice in mind. Thank you!

nhantran

Aug 28, 2017

Writing Feedback / [IELTS task 1]The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England [8]

WELL, as I know. The overview you could put in both at the beginning and at the end, but it should be put at the beginning. The second thing is that you should not give specific information in the overview, for example, percentage or exact numbers. I hope this usefull for you.

nhantran

Aug 28, 2017

Student Talk / I am a bit shy, when I have to speak in English, I always worry about my mistakes; I lack confidence [33]

Well, you know. I used to be like you. I know the only reason that all of English learners can't speak English is that they don't practice it frequently and they are always afraid. You can find a partner to practice together or just join any English club. If you are in HCM city, you can find Language Exchange Coffee House. there are many people there speaking English everyday. I hope this useful for you.

nhantran

Aug 28, 2017

Writing Feedback / Writing task 1: the percentage of female members of parliament of euroupean countries [4]

women present in the main government body

The line chart gives information about the percentage of women who are the members of parliament in five countries namely Germany, Italy, France, UK and Belgium over a 12-year period.

Overall, there was an upward trend in the number of female members of parliament in all countries, with an exception for Belgium.

In 2000, Germany saw by far the highest number of female working in parliament, at around 34% while the second biggest proportipn was seen in Italy, at nearly 27%. In the following 12 years, female members working in parliament in Italy increased considerably, rising to nearly 40% whereas this figure for Germany was just at 37%. As a result, Italy had by far the highest number of female members of parliament in 2012.

In Belgium, by contrast, this figure fell gradually from 2008 to 2012, standing at 24% in 2012 and had the same percentage with the UK in the same year. The number of France women working in parliament increased slightly, rising from 25% to over 30% over a period of 12 years.