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Name: Chi Do
Joined: Jan 4, 2018
Last Post: Jan 6, 2018
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From: Viet Nam
School: Hanoi Amsterdam

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MrsOng   
Jan 6, 2018
Undergraduate / Lafayette's rigorous economics program emphasizing on the global contemporary issues attracts me. [2]

Why Lafayette?

(20-200 words)

Lafayette's rigorous economics program emphasizing on the global contemporary issues attracts me. I profoundly take care of what is happening around the world; therefore, it is suitable for me to have an education through the liberal-arts lens to achieve a global mindset. On campus, I will have chances to collaborate with professors as research assistants through the EXCEL Scholars undergraduate research program. These research help me not only build strong bonds with professors, further explore and understand the role of social, political and science in the economics world but also potentially have professional advancement. Outside the class, I will have many opportunities to participate in Lafayette's EEGLP, which use interdisciplinary aspect of an economics to solve contemporary problems locally toward globally. There is also The Investment Club, which practices for my skills of investing, making decisions, observing to prepare and get familiar with my intended career. I want to be an innovative student who possesses characteristics of a leader to inspire others to generate global solutions and has the perspective to tackle the entire world outside my economics domain. So why not choose Lafayette as my destination but also my beginning in the next four years?

Thank in advance!
MrsOng   
Jan 6, 2018
Writing Feedback / Talented people are better off working overseas IELTS writing task 2 [4]

- When it comes to example, I think you should not choose a personal one because it will be less convincing.
- In the conclusion, you should summarize your two previous arguments. Do not add another argument without coherently supporting.
MrsOng   
Jan 6, 2018
Undergraduate / Lafayette College Supplement: Why Lafayette? [4]

Here are some of my suggestions. You should not tell Lafayette wasn't the first school you researched. This will not impress the reviewer. Your supp gives out the examples which are great. Liberal arts college always provide students chance to learn various discipline; this point in your essay will not strong though it has example.
MrsOng   
Jan 4, 2018
Undergraduate / My Dickinson's supp essay; 'unique program through the liberal-arts lens' [4]

Prompt:

Why have you chosen to apply to Dickinson?



My Answer:
Dickinson is unique to me for its Business and Management program through the liberal-arts lens. For a successful business career, I have demands for a comprehensive understanding of our complex world and the interaction of issues in many disciplines, which is also what Dickinson emphasizes on. Besides, Dickinson's strengths in global education and sustainability help me develop a global mindset and make decisions in thoughts of social and environment. On campus, I will have chances to independently conduct interdisciplinary research to explore and understand the significant role of social, political and science in the Business world. Outside the class, I will have many opportunities for internship to further apply and expand my knowledge, gain valuable experience, and explore my career choices. I want to be an innovative student who possesses characteristics of a leader to inspire others to generate global solutions and has the perspective to tackle the entire world outside my Business domain. This is why I choose Dickinson as my destination but also my beginning in the next 4 years.

I really appreciate your comments! Thank you.
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