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|Common App| Caltech Essay - Scientific exploration clearly excites you [4]
- I'm really not sure " for me" is formal or not
- Secondly, "exploration is something that I want to dedicate my life", should add "to" ?
- Thirdly, before " so that" you shouldn't you comma,
- "even beyond Earth say one day when SpaceX or NASA's SLS will take us to far beyond Earth", this sentence is repetitive and ambiguous.
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