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Name: Rachel Tan Swee Khee
Joined: Mar 7, 2019
Last Post: Mar 8, 2019
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racheltsk90   
Mar 8, 2019
Scholarship / GKS Scholarship Future Plan after Study (Embassy Track) [3]

Dear all, I'm from Singapore and I would like to enter the Master in Clinical Psychology Program. Please help me to see if my essay is ok and how I may improve it. Thank you!

Pursuing a Career in Clinical or Counseling Psychology



After obtaining my Master's degree, I plan to apply all the trainings and knowledge I have gained and return to Singapore and gain employment in one of the major hospitals as a Clinical/Counselling Psychologist. I also plan to continue doing research to advance the field and make it a priority to go back to Korea to join the psychology conference as a presenter. I also envision myself to set up and provide online counselling sessions specializing in Singaporean and Korean clients and realise my dream of freeing clients from mental distress. I hope to provide affordable or free online counselling to Koreans and Singaporeans who cannot afford to pay for counselling.

After gaining 3-5 years of experience working in the hospital, doing online counselling and doing research, I would like to do a PHD in Psychology to advance my knowledge and research in the field of Clinical Psychology. My long-term goal would be to open my own clinic.

Furthermore, having gained fluency in the Korean language, I will make it a priority to spread the Korean language and culture to my fellow Singaporean friends. Upon returning back to Singapore, it is my dream to set up a Korean café study group to help people who are interested to learn the language and culture. Furthermore, nowadays many Koreans who come to Singapore are interested to learn English and Mandarin Chinese; therefore, I hope to use the vlogging platform to teach English and Chinese lessons about my life in Korea.
racheltsk90   
Mar 8, 2019
Scholarship / Linguistics - Personal Statement Global Korean Scholarship [3]

In your last statement, you mentioned about how Yonsei University is a good school. However, you fail to mention why you are good for the University. Apart from having proper paragragh, you might want to consider this too. Hope it helps!
racheltsk90   
Mar 7, 2019
Letters / Personal Statement Master's programme; solutions for architecture field in Brazil [5]

I'm not sure how to give feedback, so I correct your grammar instead! Hope it will help!

I have made ... myself in working with different types ...

... will provide me with a unique opportunity

From a layman perspective, I felt that your essay is somewhat difficult to read, you might want to re-paragraph it. Some sentences in paragraph 2 seems like a repeat or might be better to be at paragraph 1. Your conclusion doesn't sound like it has ended with a wow factor. But it's my first time applying for a masters program too so I'm not sure if what I say is right.
racheltsk90   
Mar 7, 2019
Scholarship / GKS Scholarship Personal Statement - Masters in Clinical Psychology (Korea) [2]

Dear all, I am from Singapore and I'm interested to take a Masters in Clinical Psychology through this scholarship via Embassy Track. Would appreciate your help! Thank you!

GKS Scholarship Personal Statement



My ambition to study in Korea stems from my deep interest in the Korean Language and Culture. My interest in the Korean Language and Culture began when I befriended a Korean friend who kindly shared with me about her home country and we exchanged languages as she was studying and working in Singapore. Since then, I became more interested in Korea and travelled to Korea almost yearly. Being able to live and study in Korea would be like a dream come true for me; with this motivation, I applied for this scholarship program.

Due to my interest in the language and culture, I started to learn Korean on my own 4 years ago and am currently enrolled in the Pre-Advanced Level 3 Korean classes in XXX Language School in Singapore. The 4 years of learning Korean showed my determination and passion to learn the language. As I could communicate in English, Mandarin Chinese, and Korean, I believe that I would have the ability to do well in a University graduate program that incorporates Korean and non-Korean students. I have also travelled to Korea five times for leisure with my family and friends, therefore I am not foreign to the culture and the people and am confident to be able to acclimatize quickly. I also look forward and am ready to handle any challenges that I may encounter during my course of study.

I have a Bachelor of Psychology and a Specialist Diploma in Career Counselling and am currently working as a Job Coach in a Special Needs School in Singapore. As a Job Coach, I utilized my psychological knowledge to put in place special needs-friendly features in the workplace and provide individual counselling to motivate my students at work and tackle any work-related problems so that they may ultimately gain an employment before graduation. It is a very satisfying and exciting career to be able to help my students with intellectual disability find employment and become useful members of society. I am also a grassroots leader and a member of the Cairnhill CC Youth Executive Committee in Singapore and this experience has taught me valuable skills such as leadership, event planning and communication, which help me to become a more confident individual who can give back to society. My role as a grassroot leader is centered on bringing the government and Singapore residents closer together through feedback gathering and social events. I believe that this experience will help me to do well in the University's academic rigor and extracurricular activities.

My strength is in Research Methodology and Statistics during my Undergraduate study and I emerged as the top student in my cohort for the module "Advanced Behavioural Research Design and Analysis". In the final year of my undergraduate study, I earned my honours by spending a year completing a research thesis on a subject related to Environmental Psychology. My research thesis was on the restorative potential of animals in rural and urban environment on human beings using a one-way ANNOVA with planned comparisons. As part of graduation requirements, I also did a presentation on my thesis topic and findings to the audience (lecturers and teachers) and was voted as the 2nd most engaging presentation. This experience has taught me how to present my topic and findings in a simple and engaging manner to the audience so that they may benefit from the findings. I realized that I enjoyed doing research and presentation and I hope that during my 2 years in the University, I could publish at least 2 journal articles and contribute to the field of clinical and counselling psychology. My interest in developing and deepening my skills in this sector can also be demonstrated by the fact that I went onto a postgraduate degree program and consequently graduated from a specialist diploma in career counselling with a GPA of 3.67/4.

I choose to pursue a Master's degree in Psychology because it will bring me closer to my lifelong dream of becoming a Clinical Psychologist who can help my clients live a healthy mental life. In Singapore, 1 in 8 residents have a chance of getting a major mental disorder in their lifetime (Singapore Mental Health Study, 2010) and in Seoul, 1 in 4 would experience at least one mental disorder in their lifetime (The Korea Herald, 2017). Therefore, I would like to help them to overcome this and ultimately work towards being free from the disorder. This scholarship would help me tremendously to finance for my postgraduate education and fulfil my dream of studying in Korea and becoming a Psychologist.
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