Writing Feedback / IELTS - Writing task 1 IELTS Four social networking sites and their market share [3]

user engagement in social networking sites

A breakdown of the average time of netizens accessing social networking platforms and their market share is presented in the table and pie chart subsequently.

In the table, the Twitter users spending their time daily for twitting is the lowest one among the others with 0.6 hours, while the highest average spend is seen from Linkedin users of 1.7 hours per day. Meanwhile, netizens visiting other networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram have the average time to visit of around 18.2 and 16.6 each day consecutively.

However, most internet users have a Facebook account and actively communicate on that platform with over a half from the proportion given, whereas the second position of the market share is Twitter with 19%. Lastly, Linkedin has a smaller portion with only 11.34% of the netizen actively using that site.

Overall, although the internet users have less daily activities in accessing Twitter, the platform has the most average user visits if compared to other sites, whereas the average user engagement for Linkedin shows the reverse. Moreover, Facebook has the highest proportion of market share.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS - Writing task 1 IELTS Oman and Spain Populations by its citizens' age [4]

past, present and future of populations from Oman and Spain

A breakdown of the citizen ages in the two nations in 2005 and the forecast for 2055 is depicted in the pie charts.

In 2005, both the youngest and the elderly had the same proportion of initially 48% in Oman, while the middle age one emerged at 4%. In Spain, the younger generation was seen as the lowest portion with 14%, whereas the oldest had the largest percentage of 62, and the people aged 15-59 was the second biggest fraction with almost a quarter.

By 2055, although the population of younger people in Oman is predicted to increase to 6%, that of those will remain the minority, while the population of the oldest people is envisaged to have growth by 9%. In Spain, the number of the elderly will be shown a decline, but there will be an incline of the figure for the middle age people, being the greatest one in the state.

Overall, the population of the youngest will drop considerably in Oman, whereas the middle-age portion in Spain will be likely to rise dramatically. Meanwhile, the figure for the elderly in those countries will still prevail as the hugest of all ages.

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