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Tria170393

Dec 31, 2019

Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - FRIENDS WITH PEOPLE WITH SAME OPINION OR NOT [4]

need article---> Maintaining a relationship
can give advices ---> advice is uncountable noun so don't put "s"
S-V agreement ---> different one gives
need article---> have a similar view
long-lasting
use preposition ---> because of the behavior ...
can related --> if you need passive put be,or if you need active just put V1
few+N plural --->have few disagreements

thank you and sorry for correcting your grammar, actually I am still study so please forgive me if you find mistakes
interesting topic:)

Tria170393

Dec 31, 2019

Writing Feedback / Writing IELTS Task 1: Line graph about the movement to urban area in 3 countries [4]

Introduction
from the countryside to ...
over all
in countries A and C
body 1
in ~~the~~ country B's
body 2
to a/the capital city

thank you wonderful writing

Tria170393

Dec 30, 2019

Writing Feedback / Regional household recycling rates - MY FIRST IELTS WRITING TASK 1 [3]

describing a line graph

The line graph gives information about the percentage of regional household recycling rates in UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, it can be seen that UK and Germany experienced a dramatic increase, while France fell noticeably.

In the beginning, France stood at the highest position compared by the other countries at about 50%. Furthermore, the graph witnessed a plunge in the next 7 years and hit a low level at 30%. However, the figure climbed significantly and peaked at 40% in the last period.

The rates of household recycling in UK and Germany shared the same pattern. In 2005, the former stood second about 35%, but in the last period it reached the highest percentage of household recycling rates at little more than 60% and changed France position. The latter revealed the steady rise throughout the period. Even though, in the first year the latter stood at the lowest rank about 20% it peaked the second rank at little less than 60%.

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