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Name: Huong Nguyen
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littledinosaur   
Mar 22, 2020
Writing Feedback / "Flipped" - Write a movie review that you are interested. [3]

'a refreshing breath'



In recent years, when the film industry is full of mind-numbing flicks with no creativity of school love stories, "Flipped" is a refreshing breath like one of the glourious fall days that will make you remember the first time falling in love.

Based on the original novel by Wendelin Van Draanen, "Flipped" is a thought-provoking story of a Junior High boy and girl in the early 60s. It is abouy 8 years in the lives of two kids who meet when one of them moves into a new neighborhood. Juli is instantly smitten by Bryce right from the second time she sees him drive up to his new house. Bryce, being a typical second grader, finds her attention embarrassing and appalling. Though disappointed by Bryce's unwillingness to see things her way, Juli continues to give her potential dreamboat to pursue him for eternity without drawing closer. Eventually, in the touching finale, Bryce finds himself on the other side of the equation and has to win back the girl whom he used to be indifferent to.

That the film's story is set in the 60s is probably a rational decision of the director Rob Reiner. He creates a nostalgic atmosphere to the movie with the mid-20th-century romantic soundtrack Let it be me and stunning scenes, for example, an idyllic village or a peaceful school environment, all of which reminds viewers of a tranquil childhood. As we watch the characters grow up, we become more involved in the intricacies and challenges that their families face. Indeed, the feeling that "Flipped" evokes is hard to put into words, which is best felt from heart.

Additionally, the cast is absolutely remarkable as two main free-spirited actors Madeline Carroll along with Callan McAuliffe fervently perform in their roles and their own surroundings. The chemistry between them is average when Juli realizes that Bryce has redeemed himself, she still holds his hands despite having been opposite in all sense.

With this review, "Flipped" might be evaluated as a cliché scenario that is only appropriate for teenagers. However, it is a movie for adults. "Flipped" is reminiscent of, for adults to return to childhood, the innocence and bewilderment of early life vibrations. The film is not a genre of drama or hot love as seen in Hollywood movies, but I flip for Flipped as it has left me with lots of impressions.

P/S: I'd love to recieve your sincere comment and feedback. Thank you in advance for supporting me.
littledinosaur   
Mar 22, 2020
Writing Feedback / TASK 2 BEGINER - YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD SPEND MORE TIME ON CULTURAL ACTIVITIES AND LESS TIME ON SPORT? [8]

Firstly, I'd like to say that if you're required to write an essay in IELTS part, you lack edaquate word-counted.
Secondly,the stucture of the essay should include : introduction, body and conclusion part; therefore, your essay seem illogical.
Thirdly, when you mention entertaining activities or sports that help us relax, you need transitional words such as: for example, as can be observed, etc... and then clarify your points. Please write in the full form of the word, not use "isn't/there's...."

Finally, write your essay in the third subject, not "I" and give neutral viewpoint.
littledinosaur   
Feb 27, 2020
Research Papers / Write a proposal to raise students' awareness about corona virus outbreak. [4]

@Holt
Firstly I would like to thank you for your help, but I have a word limit just from 220 words to 260, so I think that if I include a lot of information such as the amount of expense or awareness rate, I won't finish my essay correctly. Could you please give me some hints?
littledinosaur   
Feb 26, 2020
Research Papers / Write a proposal to raise students' awareness about corona virus outbreak. [4]

PROPOSAL TO RAISE FELTE STUDENTS' AWARENESS OF CORONAVIRUS OUTBREAK



Introduction

I am submitting a formal proposal concerning student's awareness about the coronavirus outbreak with a view to maintaining their health as well as preventing transmission.

Current situation

The serious outbreak of coronavirus (Covid-19) which transmits from infected patients to others through close contact has petrified the whole world with its highly contagious nature. It, nothwithstanding, seems apparent that not many students in FELTE are aware of protective measures against this fatal disease.

Plans of action

This section shows our plan for developing a sense of responsibility among FELTE students in fighting this severe epidemic.
First and foremost, seeing that there is no specific treatment available as of now, we are going to launch a campaign which is aiming to strengthen student's self-awareness of Covid-19. To maximize the effectiveness of our strategy, we intend to distribute posters, leaflets and flyers in our campus in order to broaden their knowledge and understanding. At the same time, frequent disinfection is expected to be carried out to alleviate the infectious possibility of virus to some extent.

In the second place, it is noteworthy that we hold a virtual conference in which medical experts or local authorities are invited and then render their assistance on how to protect ourselves from the virus to the whole students in the faculty. Those might include counsel such as washing hands frequently with an alcohol-based hand rub or maintaining social distancing to prevent person-to-person transmission.

Expenditure

With regard to espousal, I call for a genreous sponsorship which is estimated $300 from coroperate organizations so that our ambitious plan will admirably succeed.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I anticipate that the outlined scheme above would receive your serious consideration because of its undoubtedly benefits.