emmawattson
Apr 5, 2020
Writing Feedback / Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they... [3]
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emmawattson
Mar 31, 2020
Writing Feedback / Domestic recycling - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 LINE GRAPH [4]
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emmawattson
Mar 31, 2020
Writing Feedback / Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they... [3]
Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms.
In current times, we can obtain information and keep up with the latest news through newspapers and magazines. Nevertheless, some people approve with the idea that it is no longer the best way to get news due to the proliferation of online news source. I completely agree with this viewpoint for some following reasons.
On the one hand, it is so common that newspapers still play an integral role among the newsreader even though we are living in a digital world. The newspaper came to the public in the earlier time than any other genres of communication. Thus, to most people, especially senior citizens, have developed the habit of reading a piece of news on a mundane or before starting a new day and they do not want to lose this tradition. Moreover, newspapers are considered to be more reliable compared to other news source of information these days. They believe that newspapers and magazines are invariably in their best version, written by professional journalists, meticulously checked and edited before publishing.
On the other hand, the Internet has gradually become an increasingly dominant news source by virtue of the significant changes it brings to our lives. With a highly technological device such as smartphones, laptop or tablets and internet connection, everyone are capable of accessing a substantial number of online websites just in a few clicks. Besides, people have a wider range of choices which platforms to acquire efficient information thanks to the development of the Internet. They are able to access to Facebook, Youtube, Instagram or Snapchat to keep up with the up-to-date news across the globe in a few minutes. It has revolutionized dramatically the way we catch up the news due to the constant advancement, which has made it possible to uploads online videos and auto recordings to meet up with a huge number of people, especially the youth target.
In conclusion, although agree that printed newspapers always play an essential role in our society, I would argue that online is a better choice in term of technology like this hi-tech era.
Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In current times, we can obtain information and keep up with the latest news through newspapers and magazines. Nevertheless, some people approve with the idea that it is no longer the best way to get news due to the proliferation of online news source. I completely agree with this viewpoint for some following reasons.
On the one hand, it is so common that newspapers still play an integral role among the newsreader even though we are living in a digital world. The newspaper came to the public in the earlier time than any other genres of communication. Thus, to most people, especially senior citizens, have developed the habit of reading a piece of news on a mundane or before starting a new day and they do not want to lose this tradition. Moreover, newspapers are considered to be more reliable compared to other news source of information these days. They believe that newspapers and magazines are invariably in their best version, written by professional journalists, meticulously checked and edited before publishing.
On the other hand, the Internet has gradually become an increasingly dominant news source by virtue of the significant changes it brings to our lives. With a highly technological device such as smartphones, laptop or tablets and internet connection, everyone are capable of accessing a substantial number of online websites just in a few clicks. Besides, people have a wider range of choices which platforms to acquire efficient information thanks to the development of the Internet. They are able to access to Facebook, Youtube, Instagram or Snapchat to keep up with the up-to-date news across the globe in a few minutes. It has revolutionized dramatically the way we catch up the news due to the constant advancement, which has made it possible to uploads online videos and auto recordings to meet up with a huge number of people, especially the youth target.
In conclusion, although agree that printed newspapers always play an essential role in our society, I would argue that online is a better choice in term of technology like this hi-tech era.
emmawattson
Mar 31, 2020
Graduate / "Three aspects'" - Self introduction for master's degree interview [4]
I think that you should add the data you wrote this letter and tell more about the purposes and the reason why you write it.
I think that you should add the data you wrote this letter and tell more about the purposes and the reason why you write it.
emmawattson
Mar 31, 2020
Writing Feedback / Essay about the influence of Education on eating habbit [3]
Are you sure that people expering finacial difficulties find it impossible/hard to have a real meal and that is the reason why they decide to risk their heath with unhealthy food? I think you should rethink about this and find another ideas to replace it.
Are you sure that people expering finacial difficulties find it impossible/hard to have a real meal and that is the reason why they decide to risk their heath with unhealthy food? I think you should rethink about this and find another ideas to replace it.
emmawattson
Mar 30, 2020
Writing Feedback / Domestic recycling - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 LINE GRAPH [4]
The line graph below show the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of domestic recycling in three different nations namely UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of recycling the waste from home in the UK and Germany increased steadily over this period whilst there is a decline in the number of household recycling in France.
In 2005, there was a difference of about 50% of waste recycling in France, compared to just 20% in Germany, making it the highest figure among all group. The UK accounted for a considerable amount of household recycling with about 35% in the same period. While the number of deposal recycled in each home in the UK and Germany continued to rise during this term, the ratio of that in France decrease significantly and then fluctuated slightly.
Having reached the peak of over 60% in 2015, the number of domestic waste that every home in the UK recycle was the highest figure among three different nations. Despite some fluctuations over the term, the proportion of France and Germany witnessed an increase to 40% and 59% respectively.
The line graph below show the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of domestic recycling in three different nations namely UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of recycling the waste from home in the UK and Germany increased steadily over this period whilst there is a decline in the number of household recycling in France.
In 2005, there was a difference of about 50% of waste recycling in France, compared to just 20% in Germany, making it the highest figure among all group. The UK accounted for a considerable amount of household recycling with about 35% in the same period. While the number of deposal recycled in each home in the UK and Germany continued to rise during this term, the ratio of that in France decrease significantly and then fluctuated slightly.
Having reached the peak of over 60% in 2015, the number of domestic waste that every home in the UK recycle was the highest figure among three different nations. Despite some fluctuations over the term, the proportion of France and Germany witnessed an increase to 40% and 59% respectively.
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