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Name: WEN HSI
Joined: Jun 14, 2020
Last Post: Jun 15, 2020
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VENESSA   
Jun 15, 2020
Writing Feedback / The news and information published by the media shape the public awareness in different ways [2]

Q: Newspapers are having enormous influence on people's ideas and opinions.

Why is this the case? Is is a positive or negative development?



The news and information public by the media resulted in the prolong effect to the public concept and cognition.

Nowadays, people always spend much time on whether reading the newspaper or browsing the website. All the time, they highly exposure to the numerous knowledge which might relevant to the social events or public awareness. This will affect public opinions. For example, recently, the homosexual issue becomes much more imperative, if it compared to the past. Some people perhaps can not accept or even understanding about the content of this hot issue, and after learning by the social newspaper, they could receive this perspective or even become the homosexual people.

Some people argue that this situation could be a negative phenomenon. Nonetheless, others believe that is the positive improvement. For people who reckon that is a drawback may consider individuals will easily be affected by absorbing the idea without critical thinking. However, for others who seem this influence as the bright side might argue that human can not live without using the website or the internet. As it will cause the social distancing that people will feel isolated and disconnected with this world. If human can have the critical thinking ability, it dosa not matter that the information people received will make the effect on them because they can distinguish which one should be took into account and which one should be ignored.

In conclusion, acknowledge and news people gained from any media, it must cause some effect. Sometimes are advantage to human, but sometimes are not. People do not have to accuse this development is the benefit or not. The only thing people need to do just take into consideration no matter what they knew instead of directly believing the information without hesitation.
VENESSA   
Jun 15, 2020
Writing Feedback / [IELTS]Some people think success is the best measure of intelligence [5]

Hi, you should carefully use the vocab. Because no matter how splendid the essay you wrote, vocab is also the dimension and it will also affect you score. So only when you really sure how to exactly use the accurate words, I would recommend you use the words you really know it and try to paraphrase it with same meaning.
VENESSA   
Jun 14, 2020
Writing Feedback / Task1_The Chart gives information about library borrowing in UK [4]

Statistics on library borrowings



Question: The chart bellow gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries during a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

The bar chart illustrates the number of the library borrowing in United Kingdom communal libraries over ten year between 1995 and 2005.

It can be seen that top audio visual material has the trend to increase dramatically from twenty-eight million to sixty million during the ten year. However, there is a tendency of children's books which is one hundred and seven million in 1995 slightly decreased ,which is one hundred and four million in 2005. Meanwhile, adult fiction which borrowed by three hundred and thirty in 1995, conspicuously fall by hundred million to two hundred and thirty million in this ten year period. Simultaneously, it happened that adult non-fiction plumps to merely one hundred and ten million ,which originally represented one thousand and one hundred thirteen million in 1995. In nutshell, overall it existed the large gap between the ten year that people who borrowed the stuffs from libraries are willing to borrow more in 1995 rather than in 2005.




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