Ian0800
Nov 18, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS 2 - Who should take the responsibility to reduce the environment damage? [3]
help with my gramma and main idea of this topic.
Task 2:
This issue is a controversial which affects the daily lives of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree that only the politicians should take this responsibility with my title statement reason below.
First of all, the reason why I disagree with the title that only politicians should take this responsibility of reducing the environment damage is that I believe everybody has the responsibility to take care of environment pollution. Simply speaking, if we want to reduce the environment damage, we should start doing it by ourself instead of asking politicians to solve it by their own. Also, the environment damage now is too serious to be solved by only politicians.
On the other hands, there are a variety of reasons why people hold the above argument. First, Some people might think that this is part of the responsibility of being a politician. For instance, they think if politicians want to win the election or to be supported by people, they should do somethings that can help this society to earn people's vote. Second, politicians can make influent easily, so if politicians can start doing it first, people who support him would likely to do it as well.
In my conclusion, I would state my opinion to this issue after analyzing these arguments, It is truly that everyone should be aware of this issue and start making a move to prevent the environment damage.
help with my gramma and main idea of this topic.
Task 2:
Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the politicians rather than the individuals to reduce the environment damage.
This issue is a controversial which affects the daily lives of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree that only the politicians should take this responsibility with my title statement reason below.
First of all, the reason why I disagree with the title that only politicians should take this responsibility of reducing the environment damage is that I believe everybody has the responsibility to take care of environment pollution. Simply speaking, if we want to reduce the environment damage, we should start doing it by ourself instead of asking politicians to solve it by their own. Also, the environment damage now is too serious to be solved by only politicians.
On the other hands, there are a variety of reasons why people hold the above argument. First, Some people might think that this is part of the responsibility of being a politician. For instance, they think if politicians want to win the election or to be supported by people, they should do somethings that can help this society to earn people's vote. Second, politicians can make influent easily, so if politicians can start doing it first, people who support him would likely to do it as well.
In my conclusion, I would state my opinion to this issue after analyzing these arguments, It is truly that everyone should be aware of this issue and start making a move to prevent the environment damage.
