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yvette   
Jan 14, 2010
Book Reports / Of mice and men : lone woman [3]

CRITICIZE EVERYTHING
I really need help with the intro and conclusion
like wat can i relate curley's wife to?
wat do you get after reading it.

The life Curley's wife leads is one of loneliness. All attempts to change it are rejected or misunderstood. In the end she becomes bitter and spiteful.

She is looked down at by all the people surrounding her. Even the newcomers label her bad with only one meeting. They "don't care what she says or... does"(Steinbeck 32). People are quick to judge without getting to know her. They listen first to what others have to say about and form an opinion on her based on this. She is not even given one chance to disprove those rumors. Everyone on the ranch assumed her to be a tramp for trying to talk to them and they forget that there are no females for her to befriend. They mock even mock Curley, saying he made a mistake by marrying a "tart" (28). In other words, they refer to her as a prostitute because she's always trying to talk to them. There are absolutely no women she can talk to, so there is no reason to regard her as sexually provocative. The people around her never regard her as her own person. They all call her Curley's wife; some call her a tart, others a "looloo" (51) and others, "jailbait" (51). They refer to her as everything but her name. Worst of all, the names she's being called are not sweet nicknames given to her, but derogative and offensive words. Now what type of woman wants to be called that even if it's not to her face?

Despite being insulted, she tries to befriend them because of her loneliness. She constantly finds ways and excuses to mingle among them in order to make friends. She is either "looking for Curley" (51) or for something she "lef' layin' around" (51). Persistently, she tries to talk to the men, the only people around, knowing if she doesn't have an excuse to, they would ignore her. However her trying so hard causes them to think worse of her. In this case a cheap tart. She "playfully" (31) comes to them for friendship, "bridle" (32)herself when she feels their eyes on her body. Despite this they declare her the type of girl to "clear out for twenty bucks" (32). It seems just because everyone around her is a male, no matter what she does, she will be regarded as a prostitute. If one is not given a chance there is no way to disprove already established opinions. And the opinions they have of Curley's wife have already been established in the short "two weeks" (28) they have known her. Or perhaps, they are all scared of each other when it concerns Curley's possessions. She comes to a realization that when she meets someone alone, she and the person get along just fine. However, "let two of the guys get together and they won't talk" (77) to her. They will not talk to her while another employee is there because they are afraid the other is going to go tell Curley and they would get fired. Another reason they can't talk to her with peaceful hearts is because they do lust after her. She is a looloo after all.

Because the rejected her offer of friendship too many a times she explodes with contempt at them. First, she proceeds by calling those left behind, the "weak ones" (77). She calls them this because unlike her they are males who are deemed unfit for society by the other men. Curley's wife feels really undignified. She goes on, "flar[ing] up" (78), calling them "bindle stiffs" (78). She tries being nice but the people she is being nice to do not respond to her positively. So she lashes out and frees herself of excess anger and dejection from being rejected so many times. She really insults the other outcast where she knows it hurts the most. "Nobody'll listen" them no matter what they say. However, the others will be more apt to listen so her because she is the least of the social pariahs. But, the only reason is because of the money behind her husband's name. She is more ostracized than they are because she is a female. The main group rejects her and others. She is then rejected by her fellow rejects. Ouch.

Curley's wife leads a life in which she is disdained no matter what she does.
yvette   
Dec 21, 2009
Undergraduate / MIT Pleasure Essay - Rubik's Cube [7]

just like the guy in the pursuit to happiness

it was an intersting read seing how short it was i know how hard it can be
just like a six word story
yvette   
Dec 20, 2009
Book Reports / controversy about Adventures of Huck Finn [11]

Why in the world is Huck in our Classrooms?!
Remember school? Having assignments that keep piling higher and higher as time passes? Having to read books you never understood? Books that angered you and left you with migraines at such a young age. Well, the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, is such a book. And even worse one, at that Mark Twain's purpose in writing the illicit book may have been to entertain with the adventures of a juvenile lad named Huck as he tries to evade his violent father and "sivilization" (Twain 3); but since the novel is set prior to the Civil War, the plot contains many references to slavery. Consequentially, there has been and still a long-standing dispute about whether or not the narrative should be read in schools. The irksome novel is unacceptable for the middle school curriculum, because it deifies impertinence and unruliness, teaches pitiable grammar, and exposes the reader to violent imagery.

To begin, Mark Twain's Huckleberry Finn is a negative impact on children because of the bad morals that it promotes. Unlike what accomplices declare, Huck is not a teacher of morals. Huck is a bad influence on their young minds. Many children, when exposed to Huck's rabid behavior, envy him and therefore, copy him. They see his life and consider it to be the glamorous life. Much like teens these days, and the atrocious celebrities seen on the screen. However, Huck is a more disastrous threat because he is their peer and is introduced to them by the school, the very place that is meant to keep them from doing wrong. So, it must be alright to be like Huck, right? It must be alright to be "hated by the mothers of the town because [you are] idle, lawless, vulgar and bad" (Chicago Daily Tribune, 7). It must be okay to "admire him...and [dare] to be like him" (Chicago Daily Tribune, 7). Huck's "want to smoke" (Twain, 4) has led copious children to try smoking, which as we know, can lead to addiction. This addiction would have a stronger hold on them than the average adult seeing as the nicotine has less body mass to conquer. Huck is a terrible role model. Let's not forget that Huck isn't the only character in the book. Not only will children be influenced by Huck's indecent behavior, but also by the King and the Duke's. "The royal nonesuch" (145) is an outright example of atrocious behavior rewarded by money too many a times. The Duke and the King scam people and run with the money which they spend getting into a drunken stupor. Children are not going to go out and scam their neighbors right now, but it may seem appealing to them as a future lifestyle. They start off small by being cheaters, habitual liars, and petty thieves. And just you watch as the children's

In addition, Huckleberry Finn is not an appropriate book for middle school students because the wrong grammar may throw them off course as they are still learning the basics of the English language. Both Huck and Jim's manner of speaking are composed of wrong subject-verb agreement, and others. "[Jim] tuck out en shin down de hill" (43). I read this book and I still don't know what exactly this sentence means. As one tries to read the book we subconsciously substitute words but this in effect causes on to misunderstand the events of the story. And continual sight of bad grammar gets ingrained into the mind and eventually ends up in ones written language. Another instance in which grammar affects understanding of book is when Mrs. Loftus tells the disguised Huck to "take a cheer" (54) after he came in. Is this what Mrs. Loftus actually said? Is the misspelling due to Huck being the narrator, or is just a saying? Not only is the grammar incorrect, but it is permeated by the vulgar language. Jim and other blacks are referred to as "niggers" (5). This word is even more offensive as it was at the time this book was published. At the time the book was published, several other words could have been used to get the meaning across. The word is mentioned approximately "over 215 times" (Seattle pi) in a 279 page narrative. Are there really no other words to describe a black person? Some would argue that the wrong grammar is American realism. And if so, the book belongs in history class. Nevertheless, there were blacks with better grammar than that portrayed by Jim . And even if all blacks spoke that way, you cannot just say he was writing how people spoke, and overlook what he wrote.Teaching the novel to eighth- grade kids is "pulling the pin of a hand grenade and tossing it into the all too common American classroom."(Young Spartacus) due to over use of the "N" word. "Nigger" denotes the black man as commodity, as chattel equal to livestock. Classic or not, this rancid book should not be allowed in our classrooms to continue to cause children discomfiture and chagrin about their heritage.

Most importantly, the book should not be allowed in middle school is the great amount of Violence and gore. Explanation of a fight is given As "[killing] a man,...then that man's brother kills him...and by and by everybody is killed off." This is the only way to end a feud. Some argue that the book is antiviolence. However, Huck gets into violent situations time and time again. Several fist fights erupt, with solid, painful-looking blows. Huck's father threatens him with a knife, and Huck holds him off with a rifle. Eventually the father is shown dead of a gunshot wound. Huck kills a rat by winging a bottle at it. He also shoots a boar, drags it around and smears its blood on the walls of his father's cabin. During a gun battle between feuding families, a young boy named Buck is shot and his corpse is found floating in the river. Huck's companion, Jim, shows the deep welts of a whipping he's been subjected to. During a mob scene, a shooting and a stabbing occur. Repetitive risky behavior

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yvette   
Dec 20, 2009
Book Reports / controversy about Adventures of Huck Finn [11]

that the novel is inappropriate for young children, because it glorifies irreverence and recklessness, teaches poor grammar, and exposes the reader to violent imagery.

this is my thesis
thanks!
these are just the body paragraphs the intro is some where else
yvette   
Dec 16, 2009
Book Reports / controversy about Adventures of Huck Finn [11]

These are three body paragraphs

Mark Twain's The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is not an appropriate book for middle school because of the bad morals that it promotes. Unlike what some declare, Huck is not a teacher of morals. Huck is a bad influence on their young minds. Many children, when exposed to Huck's rabid behavior, envy him and therefore, copy him. They see his life and consider it to be the glamorous life. Much like teens these days, and the atrocious celebrities seen on the screen. However, Huck is a more disastrous threat because he is their peer and was introduced to them by the school, the very place that is meant to keep them from doing wrong. So, it must be alright to be like Huck right? It must be alright to be "hated by the mothers of the town because [you are] idle, lawless, vulgar and bad" (Chicago Daily Tribune, 7). It must be okay to "admire him...and [dare] to be like him" (Chicago Daily Tribune, 7). Not only will they be influenced by Huck's indecent behavior, but also to the King and the Duke's. Huck's "want to smoke" (Twain, 4) has led many a child to try smoking, which as we can lead to addiction. This addiction would have a stronger hold on them than the average adult seeing as the nicotine has less body mass to conquer. "The royal nonesuch" (Twain, 145) is an outright example of bad behavior rewarded by money too many a time. The Duke and the King scam people and run with the money which they spend getting into a drunken stupor. Kids are not going to go out and scam their neighbors right now, but it may seem appealing to them as a future lifestyle. They can start of small by being bullies, cheaters, and petty thieves. And as if rewarded crime isn't enough nudity is portrayed.

The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is not an appropriate book for middle school students because ...
yvette   
Dec 13, 2009
Book Reports / controversy about Adventures of Huck Finn [11]

it should be read when 16 or older (which i am) however the book is still to hard to read.

Both Huck and Jim's manner of speaking are bound to confuse the young readers about correct grammar. And for the older reader, Huck Finn is painful to read. "Huck; you's de bes' fren' Jim's ever had..." As one tries to read the book we subconsciously substitute words that could in effect cause one to misunderstand the events of the story. And continual sight of bad grammar gets ingrained into the mind and eventually ends up in one's written language.

I'm using this for inspiration or help for the persuasive esssay I have to write
so please comment as often as you can
Its my first time...
yvette   
Dec 9, 2009
Book Reports / controversy about Adventures of Huck Finn [11]

Huck is a bad influence on the young minds of Many children who envy him and so therefore copy him. "Huck was hated by the mothers of the town because he was idle...lawless...vulgar and bad, and because all the children admired him...and wished and dared to be like him" -chicago daily tibune. His peers, young children, mimic the behavior of a Huck ,parentless ruffian Children reading the book also fell prey to Huck's indecent behavior. "pretty soon I wanted to smoke" (pg 4 of Huck Finn). Many a children, boys especially, have tried smoking because of this one line.
yvette   
Dec 7, 2009
Book Reports / controversy about Adventures of Huck Finn [11]

reasons the book should not be read in schools and counter arguements to it
I have not the time to post my arguements yet; reason being that I'm in the process of doing my homework
yvette   
Dec 7, 2009
Writing Feedback / SLIPPERS OF FATHER [11]

But his dream couldn't be accomplish due to war
yvette   
Oct 22, 2009
Writing Feedback / "Pontius Pilate Indeed" [3]

Pontius Pilate Indeed

The Crucible, a play by Arthur Miller, is set in Salem, Massachusetts. The hysteria begins with suspicion that a group of teenage girls found dancing in the forest are guilty of witchcraft. The reverend of Salem then calls on Reverend Hale, who hails from Beverly, to come ascertain the truth. Threatened with severe punishment girls tell lies that Satan had possessed them and falsely accuse others of working with the Devil. One of the girls has an infatuation with John Proctor, a married man, and her determination to get rid of his innocent wife, Elizabeth fuels the hysteria. Reverend Hale is a unique character because he is both a catalyst and a preventer of this hysteria. His main character flaw, like many a people, is failure to defend his beliefs. In order to characterize Hale as a naïve outsider, Miller shows Hale as misled because he defends the justness of the court and later as guilt-ridden because he realizes the court is false.

In portraying Hale as a naïve outsider, Miller describes him as a misled stranger to the inner workings of Salem, Massachusetts. Hale's own words and actions characterize him as misled or uninformed in relation to the hysteria. Since he is a "stranger [in Salem]" (Miller 198), Hale knows "it [will be] hard to draw a clear opinion" (198) those accused. He then "[goes] from house to house" (198) to learn more about the people of Salem because he does not trust his current knowledge them. Next, the narrator's privilege of knowing the character's thoughts reveals that despite "[him] [resisting] it" (200), "it is [Hale's] own suspicion [that people are lying in order to live]" (200). He already has a notion, whether or not he admits to it, that the confessions of witchcraft given are false and serve only to save the lives of the accused seeing as an accusation is the same proof of guilt and the only way to avoid punishment is by confessing. Lastly, John Proctor accuses Hale of being "Pontius Pilate" (204) insinuating that Hale knows that the people accused are innocent but absconds from telling the truth because he wants to stay in right standing with the powerful officials of the court. Throughout the rising of the hysteria, Hale, confused as he is, refuses to acknowledge to the people of Salem, much less himself, that the court is not just.

Miller uses Hale's words and actions to describe him as a guilt-ridden man. Statements from Hale's mouth show that he has realized the error of his ways. He decides to "shut my [his] conscience" (223) to the fact that "private vengeance is working" (223) through court no more and quits it. After hearing John Proctor's confession, Hale can no longer lie to himself or the court, and consequently quits the court when Proctor is condemned to be hanged. This is his attempt to, as Pilate did, absolve himself from the proceedings of the court. Words from Hale's own mouth are used to show the immense amount of guilt that rests on hales shoulder. Hale walks the prisons of Salem and in knowing that "there is blood on [his] head" (234) bases his redemption on whether or not Proctor is hung. If Proctor is to be hung, Hale promises to "count himself his murderer" (234). He blames himself for those already hung for witchcraft and doesn't want anymore blood to be spilled. He cares so much so that he dares to deteriorate his reputation by declaring himself guilty of a crime he never commits. Lastly, as the guilt-ridden self-proclaimed murderer that he is, Hale "weeps in frantic prayer" (240) for any such mercy or redemption that God can bestow upon him as he watches Proctor being taken to be hung. Hale realizes that his activism against the unjust has come along to late into the hysteria to prevail and therefore looks to God.

At the beginning of The Crucible, Hale is portrayed as confused but later on as guilt-ridden as he learns the unjustness of the court whish he so fervently supported before.
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