heyaaami
Jun 25, 2021
Writing Feedback / The extinction of animal species and plants is a pressing issue today [3]
the major environmental threats to
heyaaami
Jun 25, 2021
Writing Feedback / The debate on whether enterprises should value appearance, or the work performance of the laborers [4]
Nevertheless, dressing professionally also creates ...-> u use nevertheless but it does not have the main clause
Nevertheless, dressing professionally also creates ...-> u use nevertheless but it does not have the main clause
heyaaami
Jun 25, 2021
Writing Feedback / Task 1: The graph below shows how people buy music from 2011 to 2018 [NEW]
The line graph illustrates the proportion of how much three music methods were purchased from 2011 to 2018.
Overall, there was a considerable increase in people streaming music, which became the most widely used method in the final years, while the percentage of downloading and purchasing CDs were witnessed to decrease slightly throughout the period.
A closer look at the graph reveals that the proportion of streaming stood at nearly 5% in 2011, followed by a gradual rise to over 40% in 2018. In regard to downloading, the figure, which accounted for approximately 34% in the first year of the period, was seen to reach a peak at around 41% in the mid-2014 and then decline significantly to nearly 30% in the final year. The percentage of purchasing CDs, which was the most popular music method in the first year of period, represented at approximately 55% in 2011, 11 times higher than that of streaming. However, the figure slightly went down and ended up at only 36% in 2018.
percentage of total music sales by method
The line graph illustrates the proportion of how much three music methods were purchased from 2011 to 2018.
Overall, there was a considerable increase in people streaming music, which became the most widely used method in the final years, while the percentage of downloading and purchasing CDs were witnessed to decrease slightly throughout the period.
A closer look at the graph reveals that the proportion of streaming stood at nearly 5% in 2011, followed by a gradual rise to over 40% in 2018. In regard to downloading, the figure, which accounted for approximately 34% in the first year of the period, was seen to reach a peak at around 41% in the mid-2014 and then decline significantly to nearly 30% in the final year. The percentage of purchasing CDs, which was the most popular music method in the first year of period, represented at approximately 55% in 2011, 11 times higher than that of streaming. However, the figure slightly went down and ended up at only 36% in 2018.
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heyaaami
Jun 25, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1 The line graph illustrates the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors [4]
divided by their age-> divided into 4 age groups
the oldest group, which stands
divided by their age-> divided into 4 age groups
the oldest group, which stands
heyaaami
Jun 25, 2021
Scholarship / GKS-U SCHOLARSHIP /STUDY PLAN - LANGUAGE COURSE/ [5]
before coming to
by keeping
after coming
before coming to
by keeping
after coming
heyaaami
Jun 1, 2021
Writing Feedback / The charts below show information about three diffenrents deserts around the world. [2]
These given charts provide information about five remarkable features of three deserts, including size, the amount of rain falling annually, average temperatures and highest or lowest temperatures recorded.
A closer look at the tables reveals that Sahara desert is the most extensive one as it covers up 9 million square kilometres, followed by Taklimakan and Great Basin, which constitute 270000 square kilometres and 305,775 square kilometres respectively. However, Great Basin is considered as a desert that has the biggest distinction between the highest and lowest rainfall in an annual basis recorded as they are 5.1 and 51 cm, following by Sahara and Taklimakan.
Turning to annual average temperatures, vegetation Sahara and Great Basin deserts thrive in the most scorching summer and frigid winter as the temperature can come to 30 Celsius degrees and the one of the winter in Great Basin amounts up to -8 Celsius degree. The heat in Sahara made it the hottest one due to the fact that its temperature extremes is 58 Celsius recorded. In the contrary, Taklimakan makes up -26.1 Celsius degrees in winter, making it the coldest one of three places.
In conclusion, the condition of these environments is too harsh for people to inhabit.
Sahara, taklimakan and great basin desert data
These given charts provide information about five remarkable features of three deserts, including size, the amount of rain falling annually, average temperatures and highest or lowest temperatures recorded.
A closer look at the tables reveals that Sahara desert is the most extensive one as it covers up 9 million square kilometres, followed by Taklimakan and Great Basin, which constitute 270000 square kilometres and 305,775 square kilometres respectively. However, Great Basin is considered as a desert that has the biggest distinction between the highest and lowest rainfall in an annual basis recorded as they are 5.1 and 51 cm, following by Sahara and Taklimakan.
Turning to annual average temperatures, vegetation Sahara and Great Basin deserts thrive in the most scorching summer and frigid winter as the temperature can come to 30 Celsius degrees and the one of the winter in Great Basin amounts up to -8 Celsius degree. The heat in Sahara made it the hottest one due to the fact that its temperature extremes is 58 Celsius recorded. In the contrary, Taklimakan makes up -26.1 Celsius degrees in winter, making it the coldest one of three places.
In conclusion, the condition of these environments is too harsh for people to inhabit.
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