Undergraduate / Passion for the environment - Statement of purpose admissions essay appreciate [3]

1- Never quote negative things in your essay if it is not to bring a positive reaction in your life and in your person.
2- Don't think using a childhood story will move critics. Believe me, a lot of candidates are going to use that tactic, and they're definitely not going to pass.

3 - Address your real challenges.

Scholarship / Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023 - Social Welfare major! [3]

As Holt said above, you have no apparent motive. For a person who already has an academic background, there are no congruent experiences and there is no challenging process. For analysts, you will be just one more of the people to be discarded.

Please rewrite.

Undergraduate / Anesthesiologist Assistant Personal Statement. How my background suits this profession. [3]

When it comes to a vacancy in a health course, any argument you use to boost you needs to be congruent, that is, you need to pass reliability. You've chosen an area that's not easy to associate with your life history, so don't try to relate to sensationalissues. Try to understand better about what an anesthesiologist does, but above all, tell you comprehensively about your role in an operating room or with patients.

Graduate / My grad essay for Molecular Biology [5]

Have you noticed if there are any topics to be answered in the instructions on the page of this application? It will help you get a guide to what to write. When it comes to vacancies in the area of health, you have to be very careful when presenting motivations that led you to this course, because if it seems shallow, it will not bring reliability.

Essays / Doubts about the study plan; what should be addressed in that part of the application? [3]

I'm applying for the GKS-U. In last year's application, they described three topics to be answered in three pages;

1- Study plans to improve Korean/English language ability required for taking a degree course before and after you come to Korea.
2 - Goal of study and detailed study plan.
3- o Future plan in Korea or another country after finishing GKS program.

For me, these are topics that give an open space for various approaches, so I'm lost.