Writing Feedback / IELTS 1: Number of visitors to Louvre, Vatican Museums, London Science Museum, and Shenzhen Museum [3]

Number of visitor to four international museums between 1980 and 2015

The line graph illustrates how many people visited four different international museums, namely, Louvre, Vatican Museums, London Science Museum, and Shenzhen Museum, over a period of 35 years, starting from 1980

Overall, it can be seen that the number of visitors to the Louvre and Vatican Museums saw an upward trend in the period time shown. On the other hand, the figures for London Science Museum experienced a gradual fall and the number of people who visited the Shenzhen Museum remained the same.

Looking at the details, Louvre received about 9 million visitors in 1995, which increased by nearly 1.2 million compared to 7.8 million in 1980. It then had a slight decline in 2000 before it reached a peak of nearly 9.5 million visitors in 2015. A similar trend was seen in Vatican Museums. It grew significantly from nearly 5 million to 9 million between 1980 and 2015.

In contrast, the number of visitors to London Science Museum remained unchanged in the first five years at 4 million, then dropped dramatically to 2.2 million in 2015. Moreover, Shenzhen Museum fluctuated between 3 million and 3.8 million visitors from 1980 to 2015.

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Writing Feedback / TASK1: The given line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person, 1967-2007 [3]

carbon dioxide emissions

The given line graph illustrates how much carbon dioxide emissions per person on average in four different countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, over a period of 40 years starting from 1967.

Overall, it is obvious that the amount of carbon dioxide emissions in Portugal and Italy saw an upward trend in the period time shown. On the other hand, the figure for the UK and Sweden is predicted to experience a fall.

Looking at the details, Portugal saw a gradual rise in carbon dioxide emissions of approximately four tonnes between 1967 and 2007. If we look at Italy, the trends are similar. It moderately increased from just over 4 tonnes to under 8 tonnes in the first 30 years, then remained stable until 2007.

In contrast, carbon dioxide emissions in the UK were highest by 2009, and then it went down over the 40-year period to just above 8 tonnes in 2007. Moreover, the figure for Sweden grew by two tonnes in 1977, after that it experienced a dramatic fall to under 6 tonnes in 2007.

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