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Nov 26, 2009
Undergraduate / "Son, your education is your future." - UC prompt [5]

first paragraph corrections:
i think take out the once and just start it off as 'when you were a kid..
change second sentence to :
From that point on, i always dreamt of having the highest possible education because i would be able to understand the world better.