MGZolyn
Jun 15, 2010
Essays / descriptive piece about a scary place [4]
350 words is not a lot, so make sure everything said will actually help the description.
I definitely like the idea of starting outside of the house and moving throughout the rooms. Make sure to include not only descriptive words, but also metaphors and similes. Metaphors and similes create a much better picture in someone's head.
After you've written your essay, have someone else read aloud to you. Then you can decide if what you have heard matches your intended idea of the house.
Best of luck!
350 words is not a lot, so make sure everything said will actually help the description.
I definitely like the idea of starting outside of the house and moving throughout the rooms. Make sure to include not only descriptive words, but also metaphors and similes. Metaphors and similes create a much better picture in someone's head.
After you've written your essay, have someone else read aloud to you. Then you can decide if what you have heard matches your intended idea of the house.
Best of luck!