sportybluei
Dec 24, 2009
Undergraduate / Williams essay; looking through a window at a significant environment [7]
No problem, I really enjoyed reading yours. Thank you for your thoughtful comments too. Do you think it's the third paragraph that needs more explicit details? And did you see any grammatical mistakes or awkward spots in the essay? :)
No problem, I really enjoyed reading yours. Thank you for your thoughtful comments too. Do you think it's the third paragraph that needs more explicit details? And did you see any grammatical mistakes or awkward spots in the essay? :)