magicdazn
Dec 30, 2009
Undergraduate / Bowdoin Supplemental Essay - Arabic Immersion Program Learning [4]
bowdoin is so hard to write...
i myself am stuck on the conclusion.
bowdoin is so hard to write...
i myself am stuck on the conclusion.
magicdazn
Dec 29, 2009
Undergraduate / Idealist and guard - Notre Dame Supplement the difference in the world [4]
I would not recommend writing = on your essay.
Writing out the world equals, or using other words alike should be much better.
I would recommend:
Personality begets individuality.
And I would structure like this:
Though I usually pride myself on my abilities, I cannot help but agree with Barton.
Personality begets individuality. (a separate paragraph)
Allow me to introduce my attributes. First we have Witty and Sarcastic, two personal favorites of mine. ...
I would not recommend writing = on your essay.
Writing out the world equals, or using other words alike should be much better.
I would recommend:
Personality begets individuality.
And I would structure like this:
Though I usually pride myself on my abilities, I cannot help but agree with Barton.
Personality begets individuality. (a separate paragraph)
Allow me to introduce my attributes. First we have Witty and Sarcastic, two personal favorites of mine. ...
magicdazn
Dec 28, 2009
Undergraduate / Education, curriculum, liberty, more - Brown University - Why Brown Short Answer [4]
The thing is, it's only 1000 character.
But I concur with your suggestions completely. What specifics do you suggest? Like, instead of using Brown, what can I replace?
Or where do you feel I can elaborate on freedom?
But thank you so much for reading though!
The thing is, it's only 1000 character.
But I concur with your suggestions completely. What specifics do you suggest? Like, instead of using Brown, what can I replace?
Or where do you feel I can elaborate on freedom?
But thank you so much for reading though!
magicdazn
Dec 28, 2009
Undergraduate / Education, curriculum, liberty, more - Brown University - Why Brown Short Answer [4]
Please tell us more about your interest in Brown: Why does Brown appeal to you as a college option? Who or what has influenced your decision to apply? 1000 characters
While the Brown education, the Brown curriculum, the Brown liberty may be reasons why I would choose to go to Brown, the real desire lies in what Brown is. I recall my first experience with Brown during a hotel program. The admission officer at the program spoke passionately about the university and introduced to me a new freedom: the freedom to explore, the freedom to focus, the freedom to take risks, the freedom to fail, and finally, the freedom to succeed, a freedom that I had always dreamed as a part of my own undergraduate experience. Yet what distinguishes Brown even more is the chance to learn in myriad of areas. In Brown, I may pursue my photography interests in the Photo Lab and join the Daily Herald as a photographer, or even partake in the Brown University Lion Dance Team and continue my wish to promote my own culture. Ultimately, Brown offers something simply unique to Brown, and it is this idiosyncrasy of Brown that attracts me. Freedom.
Please give comments! I am hoping to turn this in tonight before I sleep.
Thank you dearly for any assistance.
Please tell us more about your interest in Brown: Why does Brown appeal to you as a college option? Who or what has influenced your decision to apply? 1000 characters
While the Brown education, the Brown curriculum, the Brown liberty may be reasons why I would choose to go to Brown, the real desire lies in what Brown is. I recall my first experience with Brown during a hotel program. The admission officer at the program spoke passionately about the university and introduced to me a new freedom: the freedom to explore, the freedom to focus, the freedom to take risks, the freedom to fail, and finally, the freedom to succeed, a freedom that I had always dreamed as a part of my own undergraduate experience. Yet what distinguishes Brown even more is the chance to learn in myriad of areas. In Brown, I may pursue my photography interests in the Photo Lab and join the Daily Herald as a photographer, or even partake in the Brown University Lion Dance Team and continue my wish to promote my own culture. Ultimately, Brown offers something simply unique to Brown, and it is this idiosyncrasy of Brown that attracts me. Freedom.
Please give comments! I am hoping to turn this in tonight before I sleep.
Thank you dearly for any assistance.
magicdazn
Dec 28, 2009
Undergraduate / "the pleasures of exploring" - Interest in Brown Supplement [9]
@Tuhina.
Not awhile. It's due Friday!!
@Tuhina.
Not awhile. It's due Friday!!