LolaYu
Dec 31, 2009
Undergraduate / Johns Hopkins Supplement- Why Biology Essay [2]
I love your essay! It flows beautifully and you subtly tied it back in with why Johns Hopkins is for you. There was just one awkward spot but besides that there's nothing wrong with your grammar and structure.
Questions were always either left unanswered or received answers were much too vague, and I found myself frustrated, constantly hunting for answers.
I am also applying to Johns Hopkins and I'll be posting my Johns Hopkins essay soon. Do you think you could take a look at it?
I love your essay! It flows beautifully and you subtly tied it back in with why Johns Hopkins is for you. There was just one awkward spot but besides that there's nothing wrong with your grammar and structure.
Questions were always either left unanswered or received answers were much too vague, and I found myself frustrated, constantly hunting for answers.
I am also applying to Johns Hopkins and I'll be posting my Johns Hopkins essay soon. Do you think you could take a look at it?
