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Posts by Sean Major
Joined: Jan 11, 2010
Last Post: Jan 29, 2010
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Sean Major   
Jan 19, 2010
Undergraduate / JACKSONVILLE UNIVERSITY: Summarize your present academic & career goals. [12]

You explained it very well! I suppose, like most 17 year old students, I really haven't experienced a whole lot of ups and downs. My life has consisted of school, sports, go to movies a couple times a year, and video games at home for entertainment. Perhaps I should study creative writing techniques!

Thank you very much EF Kevin
Sean Major   
Jan 18, 2010
Undergraduate / JACKSONVILLE UNIVERSITY: Summarize your present academic & career goals. [12]

Dear A. Smith
I never intended my points in para 3 & 4 to be about Americas problems, as much as my revealing government statistics I learned while in high school and how I felt I could both help improve those situations through businesses I would love to start, as well as help my fellow Americans. I can't believe how cluless I am. I better get serious!

Thank you!
Sean Major   
Jan 16, 2010
Undergraduate / The Impact of Being a Twin (Common App essay) [5]

Dear Amelia
Wow you are a very intelligent writer! I think it is a tremendous paper! I commend you on your career goals! I know that so, so, many American children feel like your brother. Here in Florida children must enroll in pre-k and then kindergarten in addition to 12 years of primary and secondary schooling. A lot of kids feel there is very little reward for 14 years of school. Upon earning my MBA I am going to establish a Success Academy that will enable students to earn AA, AS, BS, and Masters while in high school. Its not dual enrollment! I hope my evaluation of your writing as superior is in line with an admissions counselor. I too am making the transition to college!

GOOD LUCK and GOD BLESS
Sean Major   
Jan 16, 2010
Undergraduate / "to make a successful transition to college" - what does this question mean? [2]

"What does it mean to make a successful transition to college?"

The transition is moving forward from high school to college. A successful transition could include but not limit:
1) The actual "physical" move from home to campus, what it took to do it , having to cope with new enviroment away from family, as well as taking 100% responsible for all chores, tasks, scheduling, bills, etc.

2) The difference between high school and college to you.
3) The maturing process needed to focus on getting school work completed and on time. College leaves it all up to you whether or not you succeed in every single aspect.

Try making notes on the stages of progression you made from your freshman year through to graduating and what it would take to have a successful move from high school to college. If you don't know exactly what entails in going to college start doing research, asking your folks, teachers, and people who have made the transition. You could google the question, or even ask on here possibly.

I am also making the transition!

GOOD LUCK and BLESS!
Sean Major   
Jan 15, 2010
Undergraduate / JACKSONVILLE UNIVERSITY: Summarize your present academic & career goals. [12]

My goal is Business management or finance. I hope to have that part figured out my freshman year. My interests right now are investing and finance. I don't know exactly where I'll end up professionally 10-30 years down the road. That is why I want to be well educated and earn a degree in business, more than likely an MBA. I plan on establishing the academy and micro businesses from an investors standpoint and selling them. I want to help kids but I don't want a degree in education. I may stay in the micro businesses I mention for a while. I added para 3 & 4 to set up why I want to establish school and micro businesses. As well as the entire outline to show JU that I am a serious student. My GPA is just below the minimum to get accepted. JU's admittance said that the essay could help get me in. Although I never failed a course, I didn't earn as high of grades as I needed during high school. I had to travel 2 hours each way to get to and from school, I played 3 different sports yearly, had a whole lot on my schedule every day, and I typically didn't get home until 10 pm every night. In college I will be living on campus and I will be able to focus on earning higher grades, and my degree.

Should I delete delete para 3 & 4 ?

Thank you very much for your evaluation. If you could offer more input I would be greatful. I would like to help you any way possible!
Sean Major   
Jan 13, 2010
Undergraduate / JACKSONVILLE UNIVERSITY: Summarize your present academic & career goals. [12]

* I feel the essay is strong without paragraphs 3 & 4. But I want to add the two paragraphs to explain how important the issues were in aiding my decision to major in business. Do they merit remaining in essay? Should they be omitted or modified?

*Evaluation will be appreciated. Thank you!
Sean Major   
Jan 11, 2010
Undergraduate / JACKSONVILLE UNIVERSITY: Summarize your present academic & career goals. [12]

JACKSONVILLE UNIVERSITY undergraduate admissions essay question:
Summarize your present academic and career goals. Please include details as to how you arrived at these goals citing influential mentors, teachers, relatives, etc. Do not exceed 1000 words.

I plan on earning my degree in Business Management. When I was in elementary school my father told me and my three brothers and sister that we will be going to college. Preparing to earn a college degree has been second nature to me. I attended a private parochial college-prep high school, that's primary objectives are to annually graduate 100%, (vs. 69% nationally, and 58% Florida in 2009) and to successfully place an average of 100% in college (98% vs. 31% in public schools nationally in 2009) following graduation!. I have always been a student first and an athlete second. My father taught me that success was inevitable with hard work and determination, and to prepare for today and tomorrow. I have never drunk alcohol, smoked, did drugs, been to a party, or been in trouble. Throughout my high school years I assisted my father tutoring children in his Playing Football with GOD Youth Ministry.

When I began middle school my father asked me what my college and professional aspirations were. He indicated this was the time to begin formulating a plan for my calling. In high school no single course struck me as career defining. With the possible exception of Economics, the science of choices we make in dealing with scarcity. I was first introduced to Economics by my great-grandfather when he explained the causes of the depression. He said as long as there were resources on earth people should never have to go through any type of depression, and no person should ever go hungry! I thought seriously about earning a degree in Economics first. I began paper trading during my sophomore year. My interest in investing is what attracted me to all facets of business. I continue to monitor my 50 portfolios and I am very excited about learning all of the different investment products and their vast sectors.

Our nation has been plagued with a dropout epidemic that costs more than $335 billion in lost wages for each class of dropouts. Over a million of the students who enter ninth grade each year fail to graduate four years later. In fact, about seven thousand students drop out of school every day. Dropouts significantly diminish their chances to secure a good job and a promising future. Additionally, not only do the individuals suffer, but each class of dropouts is responsible for substantial financial and social costs to the communities, states, and country.

America's economy appears engaged in a downward slide that has perhaps been aided by the invite of cheap imports from Japan beginning in the 1930's, to the removal of over 75% of American manufacturing since the 1970s. That's everything from clothes, shoes, and electronics, to automobiles, toys, and dog food in just less than four decades. These activities have contributed to both the decline of America as the manufacturing capital of the world, and the loss of millions of jobs. Since 1971 when President Nixon suspended the gold backed dollar, in order for our economy to expand, Americans must be in debt! All of these factors have cost American workers in excess of $2 trillion in lost wages and the continued contraction of the middle class.

My immediate plans upon graduating will include establishing a middle and high school Success Academy aimed at giving every child in America a reason to graduate! I also plan on introducing micro manufacturing and businesses to America. I want to assist in the return of America as the manufacturing capital of the world again. I believe these businesses will bring about the end to hunger, poverty, bad debt, illiteracy, drug and alcohol dependency, crime, welfare dependency, and oppression in America. Albert Einstein once said the value of a man resides in what he gives and not in what he is capable of receiving.

I would like to thank five phenomenal people for both helping shape my financial literacy, and helping me decide my college major. My first guide arrived in the form of a gift. The summer of my freshman year my dad gave me the book Rich Dad Poor Dad, by Robert Kiyosaki. Mr. Kiyosaki introduces what the rich teach their children, and that "business" is more significant than "money". I was introduced to my second influence while doing a report on America's greatest investor, billionaire Warren Buffett. Mr. Buffett (Columbia, class of '51) also known as the Oracle of Omaha, recently told 700 Columbia MBA students he would pay $100,000 right then for 10% of the future earnings of any one of them! I met my third mentor when I studied Economics during my junior year. Mr. Watson taught with one purpose, for all of his students to succeed! He is a shining example of what I believe a great teacher is. The fourth and fifth influences in my life are none other than my mom and dad. They provided me with a tremendous education that I will appreciate for the rest of my life.

As I prepare to move onto the next stage of my life I advance with knowledge learned from my personal and family experiences, from insightful and devoted teachers, as well as professional influences. Although we live in a great nation it's clear our primary education system and our economic and financial systems need serious attention in order to put us back on the track our founding fathers laid for us. I can achieve my goals by earning my degree in Business at Jacksonville University's Davis School of Business.

Sean Major
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