Writing Feedback / TOEFL:living in the dormitories or in an apartment [5]

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Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in

apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the
community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.

Nowadays, student who want to attend a university that is far from their hometown, have the possibility to live in the dormitories of the university or choose to live in apartment in the community. Bothe of the dormitories and the apartment has some advantages.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL: students are the only direct receiver of the work of their teachers [3]

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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.

Teaching is one of the most important jobs. People who exercise this work should have some characteristics that allow them to success in taking student to a high level of education. A lot of methods are available to schools in order to evaluate their teachers, but I advocate totally the method that allows students to evaluate their own teachers .

Firstly, the students are the only direct receiver of the work of their teachers. When teachers give their courses, they address to students. Schools can not evaluate teachers only by the results of the exams. Students can give more evaluation than just score. They can reveal about the behavior of their teachers on class and outside. As we know, the work of teachers does not consist only in giving lessons, but to help students in their studies, to communicate with them and advice them on the educational subjects.

Secondly, some teachers need to be evaluated by their students to give more efforts. If the teachers know that they will be evaluated by their students, they will endeavor to make their students more satisfied of them. They will be more creative in the way they teach and make the students understand better their lessons. Therefore, the more the students are satisfied of their teachers, the better the teachers are evaluated.

Another reason for why schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers, is because schools should care about their students , not about their teachers. It is well known that schools are for students. If the students do not appreciate their teachers, how can they appreciate their studies . Teachers who are bad evaluated by their students have the possibility to change the schools where they work, or change their work. Students who do not appreciate their teachers have rarely the possibility to change their schools.

Some people think that when teachers are evaluated by their students, they can create a feel of a fear. I think that the teacher who gives all what they can and deal with their students in the best way have nothing to worry about. When teachers put the students in the centre of their preoccupation, they will wish to be evaluated by them.

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers , and integer them in making the decision about their teachers. This approach give more importance to students and it will shows more positive results in their education.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL: THE INTERNET - problems or information? 'most powerful media' [8]

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Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Internet has becomes one of the most powerful media in the world. Almost people nowadays can access to it without any help or assistance. I think that internet really provides people with a lot of valuable information that can help them in their lives or their professional careers. There are a lot of factors that lead to put the internet in the first place to seek information.

First of all, people are not more patient, they want an easy way to get information. There are a lot of sources of information but the internet can be considered as the easiest source to provide the information needed. People have only to write their key of research and than the internet will research and give them the information they need. On the other hand people have not to try other methods or alternatives to get the information as they do before. They do not have to go to the libraries and search for the information by reading books. They have not also to ask other persons about the information that they need.

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