Writing Feedback / The differences and similiraties of PIURA and AREQUIPA -Comparison/Contrast Essay [6]

Hi everybody, I was wondering if someone can check and maybe correct this peruvian essay =)

Well. I tried to make an Essay about the differences and similiraties of PIURA and AREQUIPA 2 cities of PERU taking in consideration the climate, types of activities and locations of beaches and mountains but I'm not so sure..

Some words that maybe you don't understand:
Mancora and Posicta are beaches
Piura and Areqipa are 2 cities
Cotahuasi canyon and La Chila Mountains are native names

Here is the Essay:

Piura vs. Arequipa

People are always looking forward to their vacation period. There are many options to choose. However, the two most common places that people would go for vacations are the beaches of Piura and the beautiful mountains of Arequipa. Both places offer a variety of fun activities. The beaches of Piura offer activities that the mountain of Arequipa cannot offer and vice versa. The mountain and the beach are totally different. The purpose of this essay is to contrast the climate, types of activities and locations of beaches and mountains.

I am going to discuss Arequipa first. Climate is the main factor in determining if a vacation is enjoyable as a person who dislikes the cold weather would not enjoy the coolness of the mountains. However, it is the climate that influences the type of activities offered. Such activities would be mountain climbing, mountain biking, hiking, and skiing. Besides, there are many regions that have mountains where people can go and have a great vacation. For example, Cotahuasi Valley is famous for its beauty and the great variety of attractive places it has. It is located in La Chila Mountains and the Valley is well known for the Cotahuasi canyon, the deepest canyon in the world.

In spite of this description about Arequipa, Piura also shares some several important points to consider.

To compare Piura with Arequipa, Piura has a warm weather that is one of the most important features that the beaches has, especially near to Mancora beach. Sun and fun are two words that describe Piura. The temperature in those places is always hot. The sea and the warm climate determine the activities that are available at the beach. People can swim, play volleyball, play soccer, and ride water bikes. In most coastal sites, there are discos and restaurants where people can dance or party throughout the night. For example, Mancora's beach is a frequented place for the surfers because of its tall waves, while Pocitas's beach is favored by tourists because its small pools are ideal for worry-free bathing.

It doesn't matter what place a person decides to choose. The fun is 100% guaranteed. People often choose one of these vacation places depending on their liking. I like the beach better than the mountains, but sometimes it is better to take a risk and try a different place to enjoy like Arequipa.

Thanks a lot, I hope your comments

Writing Feedback / How to take a good photograph? Chronological order - process Essay [4]

How to take a good photograph

It seems like whatever you try, the pictures are just so plain.

Well, do not get crazy because there are three practical steps to take a good photograph.

First, you have to buy a decent camera that it's not the same to say to get an expensive one because mega pixels do not matter.

Third, paying attention to lighting and avoid the flash is very important...

To conclude, to take a nice picture of someone, you should find a place with plentiful indirect light such as rooms with lots of windows and set up your subject, step away from them as far as reasonable, zoom in, and click away.

Sorry, but I'm new in this forum so I don't know If I've put the message in the correct place

Thanks a lot