Writing Feedback / "parents are the best teacher of their children'' - agree or not? [7]

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Secondary, regularly parent's teaching methods have strong influnece on their children about behaviour, conception..because they understand their children better than anyone and while others teacher may in school,in centre..found that most of them encountered difficult in teaching process, children's parents have methods to made them understand clearly and quickly what they taught. With this reason above, i really agree that point''parents are their children's best teachers''.

Writing Feedback / "parents are the best teacher of their children'' - agree or not? [7]

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First of all, parents are the most important people with us, who not only given us alive but also taught us the first simple but important lessons from the bigining of our age to older ages in order to we can become a human. From the bigining of our age, parents taught us from smallest things as standing, sitting, eating to nessesary rule in sociaty,moral sense and many others thing which needed for our life,so i believed that very difficult for us to become a human without parents.

Writing Feedback / The most important qualities of a good supervisor (boss) - rate my essay [3]

i think ''conclusion'' instead ''in conclusion'' is better,and you should use muntiply form of sentences instead use too much ''who'' ''whom''

Undergraduate / "A better degree, a better life style", Commonapp Transfer essay [8]

i'm complete agree!