hpscotsgirl
Oct 12, 2010
Graduate / "the Dance team talents" - Major obstacles faced in life and how you overcame them [5]
I dont like how short and choppy your sentances are: give more details and flow more. But i do like your topic, and want to see what else you can do with it! :)
I dont like how short and choppy your sentances are: give more details and flow more. But i do like your topic, and want to see what else you can do with it! :)