dennis730
Oct 24, 2010
Undergraduate / True Diversity = Something I Myself Do Not Have; Yale Supplement [5]
to nishabala:
thanks for the comments! I will try working on much more clarification because the way you read it I would not want college admins to read it the same way. but I think this paper does reveal something about myself. Yes they already know that I am Chinese American and they already know I participate in Model UN, theatre, etc. What they don't know is how I felt being the only Chinese American participating in this activities. I definitely see how I might be too humble, I was struggling with that as I wrote this. But my edit, which I am working on touches on at. I want my paper to show progression, first because of these experiences, I felt one of a kind. But as time progressed I soon realized I am not entirely unique. It might sound self-bashing. In the end the point I am trying to get across is that each student tries so hard to bring diversity, they try so hard to be so one of a kind. But eventually most people reach a limit to how different they can be. In the end, I realize diversity is so much easier than being a member of a different race that tries to break stereotypes. Instead, even if to statistically average people come together, the interactions between the two creates a type of diversity.
to nishabala:
thanks for the comments! I will try working on much more clarification because the way you read it I would not want college admins to read it the same way. but I think this paper does reveal something about myself. Yes they already know that I am Chinese American and they already know I participate in Model UN, theatre, etc. What they don't know is how I felt being the only Chinese American participating in this activities. I definitely see how I might be too humble, I was struggling with that as I wrote this. But my edit, which I am working on touches on at. I want my paper to show progression, first because of these experiences, I felt one of a kind. But as time progressed I soon realized I am not entirely unique. It might sound self-bashing. In the end the point I am trying to get across is that each student tries so hard to bring diversity, they try so hard to be so one of a kind. But eventually most people reach a limit to how different they can be. In the end, I realize diversity is so much easier than being a member of a different race that tries to break stereotypes. Instead, even if to statistically average people come together, the interactions between the two creates a type of diversity.