helenheidel
Dec 14, 2010
Undergraduate / India- Incredible, hectic, noisy, confusing, historic, beautiful. UW ESSAY, HELP?! [4]
I am a world traveler; I have soared above the horizon in steel birds, saw sunrises and sunsets, as I landed in some of the earth's most exotic places. I have lived in four different countries in South East Asia, but India intrigued me the most. How can you describe living in a country with over 1.1 billion people? It was overwhelming, but it opened my eyes to a different aspect of life. I was surrounded by the roots of Indian culture and the images of its diverse beauty have stayed with me. I saw a fraction of India's history while the Taj Mahal's strong ivory structure towered over me; the pride of India, gleaming under the scorching sun. I saw the country's unsolved social conflicts in the distressed eyes of poverty-stricken children. As I describe endless stories about India to my friends, I see its culture in myself. Adapting to India deemed to be my biggest challenge, yet it taught me about the importance of accepting other cultures.
thanks for the advice!! better intro?
I am a world traveler; I have soared above the horizon in steel birds, saw sunrises and sunsets, as I landed in some of the earth's most exotic places. I have lived in four different countries in South East Asia, but India intrigued me the most. How can you describe living in a country with over 1.1 billion people? It was overwhelming, but it opened my eyes to a different aspect of life. I was surrounded by the roots of Indian culture and the images of its diverse beauty have stayed with me. I saw a fraction of India's history while the Taj Mahal's strong ivory structure towered over me; the pride of India, gleaming under the scorching sun. I saw the country's unsolved social conflicts in the distressed eyes of poverty-stricken children. As I describe endless stories about India to my friends, I see its culture in myself. Adapting to India deemed to be my biggest challenge, yet it taught me about the importance of accepting other cultures.
thanks for the advice!! better intro?