Undergraduate / 'most important tool in this world' - Music, powerful Russian songs ...UC # 2 [3]

Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important
to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the
person you are?

I believe music is one of most important tool in this world, when there is something happens either bad or good music is always there with you! Music always has been my best friend, just music instrumentals, song, everything when it is complex it is very unique. When I was three years old I was singing this ...

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Music has always been my best friend. Whenever I think about my childhood, I always remember little me singing song about horse in front of full of audience, before I almost understand what the meaning of that song. Sometimes, I think my life started from that moment. One day my grandmother was looking me and my sister but in my hometown electricity used to shut off was typical thing. There was nothing to do besides talking. So I started singing the song that I learned from kindergarten, from television, and radio. My little sister and grandmother were enjoying my songs that I was singing that night. From that moment I understand, however it is sad or black day I could give people joy through my song. When I was in elementary school I had a chance to sing New Year song out of many talented students, but I could not sing like when I am alone. My tone has changed like deaf person singing and I was worried about how I look and what people think about me. From that time, I stopped singing in public but just for my self. But when I was in ninth grade, I moved from small city to capital city Ulaanbaatar, I transferred school where I had to take three languages, which were Russian English and Japanese. I had some difficulties in learning Russian. In order to get better grade at that class, I need to do some extra credit. I have known this song called "Pod Moscavniya Vechira" the most popular song which my mother used to sing when I was kid. I told myself I have known this song more than ten years now it is the time to show. So I sang " Pod Moscavniya vechira" my Russian teacher amazed how I sing that song because of that I had a chance to sing that song in front of Russian guest students and teachers from Russia whom are visited to my school. I gained my confidence again like when I was performing in front of my grandmother and sister. At senior year I became the best singer of my high school. Since I came here in United States I attended donation concert to Mongolia, in order to help herders who are having hard time in winter. I also performed two famous singers from Mongolia now I have been able to sing confident, happily, powerful and strong in front of anyone.

Undergraduate / (Volunteering, fired because of the view of party, Mongolia) UC intended major [6]

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What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field - such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities - and what you have gained from your involvement.

When I immigrated to United States in 2007, I was pretty much fascinated about an American culture. The girl from Mongolia where democracy just planted about 20 years ago, it was one of the biggest opportunity and maybe loose. Because I was just high school graduate who graduated with honor diploma who just got accepted to enter one of the biggest University of Humanity in Mongolia in political science major. But my brave decision brought me here in United States. My eyes reopened to the better education and better community. When I entered college my first ESL class teacher said America is the dream country no matter who you are, where you from, how tall or small you are when you put your goal and try your best in order to achieve it your dream will come true. Her first typical this few sentences was inspired and strengthened me because I was given up my dream work because of my language barrier. I see people on street in America not because of government fault but when I was in active member at student government at my high school back in Mongolia. With a charity club we delivered food and clothes to homeless children and poor people. While volunteering, I met this homeless doctor who lost his job not because of laziness either his lack of education, but because of government where corruption is rampant. There are so many educated Mongolians are living in the street. When I was fourth grade, my classmate said her mother fired because of her political view, she was not a politician but she was just head master of municipal hospital but because of communist party won the election. As a middle school kid I was worried about my single mother who was the head master of my school because she was a member of Democratic Party. How unfair it was. Because of this unfair political system in Mongolia I wanted to know more about politics and law I started my first volunteer at amnesty international human rights organization. Volunteering at Amnesty international gave me an opportunity to understand bite knowledge about human right and law knowledge about Mongolia as well as other foreign countries. Because of lack of knowledge about law so may people lost their life I had understood it during my volunteer at AI. At Amnesty international I used to translate one part of wire magazine; it helped me to explore and know about foreign countries and how in other countries law works and doesn't work etc. After two weeks later in America I started work in American restaurant gave me huge change in my life, it helped me know about this country culture, and the language. Back in Mongolia, it is very hard to find a job if you are college student. Working in restaurant I was dealing with so many people with different characteristics, it helped me to express myself, and to learn about others.