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Posts by butterbescotch
Joined: Feb 22, 2011
Last Post: May 19, 2011
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butterbescotch   
Mar 25, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2: Modern world make us more dependant or independent [4]

I think it is advanced rather than advance. But have a second opinion. I am not entirely sure.

The conclusion is a bit off. Maybe provide some statistics? Or something that is reasonable.
Upon reading your essay, I can't still determine to agree with your conclusion since the details you gave
have the same weight.

KIU!
butterbescotch   
Mar 25, 2011
Student Talk / I'm weak in English, unable to write any composition. What to do? [31]

@ilove

I, too, have the same experienced. I am afraid to speak English in front of other people, since
I am not a fluent speaker. Also, I am afraid of being laughed and mocked at.

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One thing I can't able to grasp English is from British. They talk so fast and so sharp. @___@
butterbescotch   
Mar 22, 2011
Writing Feedback / "Never, never give up" - Your favorite saying [9]

"You'll never get what you don't deserve"
I realized that I could not just ponder and wish something to be mine or to happen. I have to work for it and do my best and see how it works. Even though, I mostly failed my attempts; I was never disappointed. Since the more I try the more my price will weigh.
butterbescotch   
Mar 4, 2011
Writing Feedback / "Listening to music and reading" - Things That Inspire Me [2]

Life can be dull without the aid of inspiration. They are not necessary but they are ideal. They could be in the form of a person, an activity, a legacy or anything that a person values. Inspirations vary from person to person but all of them seem to share a common goal - to make life worth living. I found them, out of simplicity, just by listening to music, by reading or by looking at the people around me.

Listening to music brings me something to ponder. No matter what is the genre of music, the message always conveys a strong emotional punch. The music drowns me with the support of a headphone. The thump rhymes on my heartbeat. The vocal brings out a feeling of anger, joy and contentment. Eventually, flashes of memories start appearing, from the moment of my first bike until my high school graduation. Then, if I have caught the notion, I started singing. I am not a musician or a good singer. In fact, I don't have to be. As long as the feeling is there, the feeling counts on singing. All I can say is, it forms a synchronize melody to my experiences and it lets me be myself.

Whether I am killing time or wanting for entertainment, reading never fails to amuse me. Usually, I read before I write. It is a good preparatory for fetching some ideas. I can have a text-based writing or a brand new context, either way it conquers my writing block. Also, it gives me a sense of enthusiasm and prepares my mind for another creative experience. In addition, reading offers amusement. If I am alone, I would pull out a novel. Later, I am already in a hotel in New York or a coffee shop in Washington D.C. Finally, I gain more knowledge on how the world works and how should I live with it. It is my way out of ignorance. All in all, reading kills my boredom.

Until I see people all around me, then my day is complete. I am inspired at people on what they did, said or simply because of their presence. These people are nothing in particular. These people may be the pedicab driver who helped me pass an exam. A minute delay or two would have restricted me to finalize my answer on the last math problem. They may be the woman the other day who thanked me for answering her question. She was having trouble with the keyboard; she held out a hand, gesturing for help. I fixed it and her praise made me feel I could solve any problem, even finding a needle in a haystack. Or the girl, whose face bore a thousand watts smile, that brightened my whole day. Had she took one step forward, I would have died out of excitement. They did me an extraordinary favor out of simple situations.

Inspirations are like windows or doors, it invites us to come closer and show us more. Or a pair of shoes that is already worn out; sometimes, they have to be replaced. My inspiration may be nothing compared to yours. These things are not extraordinary; they don't call for a drumroll or a string quartet. However, they had, at some point, made my life worth living.

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