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Posts by seancron
Joined: Feb 22, 2011
Last Post: Feb 22, 2011
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Feb 22, 2011
Scholarship / My Dad - family member that has been influential in your life [2]

Dad
The driving reason behind my high school success is my father. As I am entering into adulthood, I have come to appreciate just how hard my dad has worked for my family. He works every day for 12 hours including weekends my whole life. For the first half of my life he worked the same schedule while spending 3 hours travelling to and from work. The most remarkable trait in my dad is that he has never once complained about working. He gets up at two in the morning and heads in to work without a word of protest. Although he works his butt off, he comes home every day in a great mood and tries his best to make it out to all of my athletic and academic events. I could never thank him enough in words, so I thank him in my school work. I study hard so that I can have a different life than my dad, so that I can spend more time with my family than he ever could. I do it all for him.
seancron   
Feb 22, 2011
Writing Feedback / SAT essay, can we fuse the ideas or just choose one side when offered the choice? [5]

I took an SAT prep class that really helped me with this topic. They told us that you definitely need to pick a side and provide three clear examples to support your thesis. The people that evaluate your essay do not have to agree with your side they are looking for how you arrived at that conclusion. It helped me improve my wring score by almost 100 points, good luck
seancron   
Feb 22, 2011
Writing Feedback / How young people's behaviour is influenced by their peers [5]

Roma

you need to go back and proof read your essay again. You seem to have a problem with keeping the same tense throughout. For instance "brought" in the 4th sentence and embarked in the next sentence. Good luck
seancron   
Feb 22, 2011
Scholarship / My future plans with career and community in 10 years (but I'm undecided!) [3]

the essay wants my future plans with career and community in 10 years however I am totally undecided about my future plans. I am thinking of majoring in engineering, have worked with kids both as a tutor and swim coach but dont know how to not come off sounding like a "pageant" answer. The essay is less than 500 words.
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