NaddieWU
Mar 11, 2011
Writing Feedback / New generation no more read books. Is this complaint true? [4]
Actually i think your conclusion is too absolute
Actually i think your conclusion is too absolute
NaddieWU
Mar 11, 2011
Writing Feedback / "for a better world to live" - wealthy nations to share their wealth among other [3]
Every nations is different and they hashave various achievements . For development developed countries, they arehave already handled their basic problems in many good treatments for a long time.butHowever, for other parts of this world ;, developing countries had struggle intently for theirs lacks, such things as food and education. Developing countries need help to handle these. So, should other surplus nations save these problem? . The answer is absolutely Yes. bB ecause for a better world to live the development countries had realize that their surplus can solve these problems. And I will explain them in further.
Every nation
NaddieWU
Mar 10, 2011
Undergraduate / "MUN Club Leader at school" - activities, Common App Short answer [2]
Promt
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
Response
Model UN is one of the most significant elements through my high school life. At first, I was just a member of school MUN Club. From there, I learned about MUN for the first time and attended several club meetings. Later I participated in some large-scaled conferences and started to be familiar and infatuated with Model UN. In Grade 11 I became the leader of school MUN Club. As a leader, I have to in charge of the whole club, including recruitment of new members; leading new members into the world of MUN; contacting conferences and for them. I had many "first times" from MUN. The first time to give a speech in front of a large amount of people; the first time to design a recruitment poster; the first time to do all the logistical works and took care of them while we went out taking conferences. I received unforgettable experiences from MUN.
154 words in total.
I think my answer is quite flat....
If there is any gramma mistakes, please also tell me~
Thank you
Promt
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
Response
Model UN is one of the most significant elements through my high school life. At first, I was just a member of school MUN Club. From there, I learned about MUN for the first time and attended several club meetings. Later I participated in some large-scaled conferences and started to be familiar and infatuated with Model UN. In Grade 11 I became the leader of school MUN Club. As a leader, I have to in charge of the whole club, including recruitment of new members; leading new members into the world of MUN; contacting conferences and for them. I had many "first times" from MUN. The first time to give a speech in front of a large amount of people; the first time to design a recruitment poster; the first time to do all the logistical works and took care of them while we went out taking conferences. I received unforgettable experiences from MUN.
154 words in total.
I think my answer is quite flat....
If there is any gramma mistakes, please also tell me~
Thank you
