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"for a better world to live" - wealthy nations to share their wealth among other


Ardhitya 2 / 5  
Mar 10, 2011   #1
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education?

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Every nations is different and they has various achievement. For development countries, they are already handle their basic problem in many good treatments for a long time but for other parts of this world ; developing countries had struggle intently for theirs lacks such things as food and education. Developing countries need help to handle these. So, should other surplus nations save these problem?. The answer is absolutely Yes. because for a better world to live the development countries had realize that their surplus can solve these problems. And I will explain them in further.

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NaddieWU 1 / 2  
Mar 11, 2011   #2
Every nations is different and they hashave various achievements . For development developed countries, they arehave already handled their basic problems in many good treatments for a long time.butHowever, for other parts of this world ;, developing countries had struggle intently for theirs lacks, such things as food and education. Developing countries need help to handle these. So, should other surplus nations save these problem? . The answer is absolutely Yes. bB ecause for a better world to live the development countries had realize that their surplus can solve these problems. And I will explain them in further.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Mar 14, 2011   #3
Thanks, Nadine. You are cool!

I want to talk about this mistake at the beginning. Here are some sentences that are correct:
Every nation is different, and each has various achievements.
All nations are different, and they have various achievements.

This sentence is incorrect:
Every nations is different.

This is incorrect:
They has various achievement.

This is correct:
Every nation is different. All nations have various achievements.


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