Posts by bbrunette312

bbrunette312

Sep 28, 2011

Undergraduate / Any ideas on the u of m business school essay? Ross School of business [5]

come up with three problems that could potentially become a business - Quick Response

Okay so I was in marketing class today and we had two very successful men, Ara and Nick. Basically they came in to inspire us to be entrepreneurs and create jobs. They told us that any problem can be turned into a bushiness and that is where I need help. We were asked to come up with three problems that could potentially become a business and I cant think of any that are not already created any help is appreciated! Thank you!!!

bbrunette312

Sep 27, 2011

Undergraduate / Hardships, Challenges, things I've faced in the past - Entrance essay help? [2]

It wants you to explain backgrounds i guess to why you didn't do as great as you think you could have and what you did to overcome this;... for the first part for part 2 it wants you to basically brag about yourself

I would probably make this 4 paragraphs, first intro on you, 2nd and 3rd challenges and accomplishments paragraphs and 4th what would make you a good choice for acceptance

Sorry if this is not right, but when I read it that's what i was getting

bbrunette312

Sep 26, 2011

Undergraduate / 'when my family broke' - VT short answer [2]

So i have to write a short response for a "If there is something you think would be beneficial for the Admissions Committee to know as we review your academic history, please take this opportunity to explain." I think this fits please let me know what you think

When I think of the word "family," I think of unity, but when I think of my "family" I think of broken. You see my oldest sister gave birth to my niece, Allison, on December 4, 2009. Incapable of taking care of her, Ali came to my home 2 days later. With both of my parents working they were unsure of being able to raise a 10th child. My sister, Megan, and I decided that we would do whatever we could to help. We set up a crib in her room and were up at all hours with Ali, even if this meant I had a test the next morning. [...]

bbrunette312

Sep 15, 2011

Undergraduate / "It happened in a blink" -- Common App Essay [3]

Instead of "my mom fatigued much quicker" try... her fatigue hit more rapidly,
Her sickness not only hit me emotionally but also physically, because of my mom's incapability to do her everyday mom duties, i took them on. I had to take care of my brother, run errands, and being a full time student i had to juggle school work into my hectic life as well.

My mom's diagnosis was what helped me to make this decision.
Knowing i could leave that impression on people made me want to become a doctor.

I really like this story and im sorry to here about your mom, these are just the changes i could come up with.
Good Luck!!

bbrunette312

Sep 15, 2011

Research Papers / Research paper topic / survey on Global Warming [10]

Do you believe in global warming?
I think this question can start your survey on global warming because most people i have talked to about this don't think its affecting us or just dont believe in it.

Good Luck!!!

bbrunette312

Sep 15, 2011

Undergraduate / 'a great education for a low cost,' Virginia Tech Application [2]

So I have to write three "optional" questions in under 250 words to help me get into VT. My grades are a little less than average and im still waiting to take my SAT. I truly think that I have a good chance into getting into Virginia Tech with early decision. OK so my first response is to "What are the top five reasons you want to attend Virginia Tech?"

Virginia Tech has all of the characteristics that i look for in a great university. When looking for a prospective school I first look at the location of the school, VT has a great location in Blacksburg. It is very reassuring to know that the Blacksburg police department and the Virginia Tech Police department work together to make sure the community is safe. Secondly I look at the National ranking of the School, at 71 I know that i would be receiving an excellent education. Third, I look at the average class size, with a 16:1 student teacher ratio I would have a better relationship with my professor enhancing my chances learning more. Fourth, I look to see what majors they offer for their undergraduates, with my dream of owning my own business, I know that the Pamplin College of Business would be a giant leap toward my dreams. Last I look at the tuition cost, Virginia Tech's low tuition I could have the opportunity to receive a great education for a low cost. Virginia Tech is a great school, and I am honored to have the opportunity to be considered.

Please help, All suggestions are helpful!!
Thank you