Writing Feedback / First Snow - Winter has begun. [6]

Winter Snowfall

One day - it could happen at the beginning of winter, or in the late fall - you wake up and feel that as if there was something extraordinary. Even just glancing at the window, you know, on the street today is lighter than usual. First snow - hence the beginning of winter. Although snow can melt even the air grow warmer still snow - it is a sign that winter is coming.

For children, the first winter snow is real happiness. Once all ran out into the street and start building snowmen, snowball, sledding and skiing. The main thing is to dress well, take gloves or mittens, in order to snow do not freeze hands. And now, you can mold snowballs, building snow tower. All enjoyed the first snow than drivers urban transport, they should work hard in this day.

First snowfall - the most beautiful. Snow soft, clean, lying on the ground, like a white feather. All of them sheltered: the roads, and lawns, and The fallen autumn leaves. But animals and birds are hurting, it is not so easy now to obtain their food from under the snow. People are trying to help them - fed, that is, leave the food there, where the animals come.They build a bird feeders. And you make a small feeder for birds, help them spend the winter.

it is for my younger brother, thanks fot help beforehand)

Writing Feedback / It is not the clothes that make a person; People behave differently when they wear different clothes [5]

Promt: People behave differently when they wear diffrent clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?

Clothes are very important atribute and criterion of modern person. Judging by clothes we can learn a lot of information about person for example: what is this person, what is his/her social status and etc.

Our behaviour constantly changes - first of all it depands on what kind of clothes we wear. When person wears tailcoat he became like courteous admirer, if he wears military uniform he trys to defense the weaks and offended ones, or person wears sports uniform, he is unstopable sportsmen whose sense of life is a record, but in bathhouse everybody is equal :)

Personally i can't go to the party with my friends in suit or go to the formal dinner in jeans and t-shorts, it seems like nightmare. Just imagine, some one appears in casual clothes at formal event, certainly every wise person be ashamed, disappointed and feel like white raven among surrounded people. When my father wears classic suits he becomes very severe boss in his work place but in free clothes he turns into a very careful and kind one at home. Of course purity and tidiness of clothes directly influence the way people behave. Any intelligent person feels inconvinient in dirty and rumpled clothes than in fresh, stroked and purit ones. These are a very simple examples from our life which clearly shows the impact clothes to our behaviour

I would like to add that smart, self-sufficient person can thrive in any clothe. We must remember that it is not the clothes that make a person, but it is person who decorates the clothes

im a frashman in writing essays
this is my second practise of writing essays thats why dont judge strictly)