Writing Feedback / the rothschilds and controlling world money reserve [3]

if any one can give me a feedback for my history class essay , thank you .

it's doesn't matter who a lot money , the important is who is controlling it's quantity on the monetary market , the rotchschilds had understand this reality about 200 years ago , exactly when nathan rotchschild was financing the war between the crown in england and the empire of Napoleon in france , i have do admitt that that man had a great futurist vision .

when we read history , we find that the battle of Waterloo were the end of an era , the end of an empire in france but the hidden part of history says that nathan were aware of the situation couple of days before the public opinion in england , and that allowed him to spread rumors that britain troppes have lost the battle then he sales all his goods , the others in panic followed him , and he waited for the last minute to buy all actions , and this is how the rothschilds became the 1st fortune in england and a partners of the crown .

a new land in the orizon seems to have a prosper economic future , USA , pushed by the same motivations , the rothchils were among the founders of what we call the federel reserve ( the FED ) , most of americains cetizens still think it's a gouvernemental institution ...no it's a 100% a private bank , and the only authorized to print money ...

it's doesn't matter who a lot money , the important is who is controlling it's quantity on the monetary market .

Writing Feedback / Geneva convention between the texts and real application [3]

2011 was the year of what we call "the Arabic spring" , we have seen those boy and girls who aspire to freedom, dignity and the right to live as humans , some of them facing army , polices , and all Agents of the dictatorial regime , in tunisia , egypt , syria , morroco ...

Some of those people has been captured and held in prisons, and treated like criminiels under all kinds of torture , but the funniest part (or saddest , it's depends on your vision ) that is some of those regimes was the first signatory of Geneva convention that prohibited the human torture even when it's comes to military information .

The most striking examples of those country that comes to my mind is morocco , always known as a touristic destination ,an amazing place to spend your holidays , with it's magic folklore and the secrets of the beauty of its landscape, this country seems to have other kind of secrets , prisons of human torture :

We can find that kind of prisons in several places in morroco , but the most strangest place that no can imagine is around the royal palace of the king , in rabat the capital of morroco , there is a prison called "tamara" , were information is extracted with certain ways that are sometimes extreme , sexual abuse , strikes , beatings ...

I love that country and I hope one a day , the king that that everybody trust , can see the truth of his own eyes and not through reports.

I am beginner in English , and hope you can help me to improve this article for my essay classe .

Thank you .