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Posts by kevinyslin
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Last Post: Dec 26, 2011
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kevinyslin   
Dec 26, 2011
Undergraduate / 'Quantum Theory' or 'My summer' - Vitality and Roomate Letter [6]

On the roommate essay,
I can't really picture what type of person you are, it mostly shows that you are thrilled to go to Stanford.
What is something you want them to know more (besides late nights and music taste, which is what most people talk about)
I hope this helps =)

Can you review my Common App essay? Thanks
Good Luck
kevinyslin   
Dec 25, 2011
Undergraduate / Common App main essay: "Out of the frying pan, into the fridge" [3]

sorry forgot the prompt: A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.

Thank You @makman09 will review yours =)
kevinyslin   
Dec 25, 2011
Undergraduate / Common App main essay: "Out of the frying pan, into the fridge" [3]

Out of the Frying Pan and into the Fridge

From the sizzling 40o Celsius summer in Brazil to the freezing, snowy -20o Celsius winters of Canada. It was February 12th 2011, an important transition day in my life.

In October 2010, my father called a most unusual family meeting. He told us that the decision made that day would significantly change our lives. He had been offered a contract to work in Canada and if he were to accept, we would have to move to Montreal early in 2011.

As a family, we accepted the offer. However, having lived in Brazil most of my life, I was initially reluctant to move since I would be leaving all my friends and everything that encompassed my childhood behind. Furthermore, I was about to begin the process of applying to Brazilian universities to study engineering, which in itself is a continuation of an unyielding process I had started earlier in high-school. I had taken every possible class offered in preparation for the arduous application regimen.

From the moment I arrived, the city of Montreal was simply breathtaking. Stepping out of the airport, I was astonished by the small droplets of snow that were falling from the sky. I had never seen or touched snow before that day. Almost immediately, I fulfilled on of my wildest dreams - to play in snow - and, yes, it was just like I imagined and had seen in the movies. This was a new and interesting element that became part of my new life. Of all of the changes, this was one of the most significant for me.

In Canada, I learned how to play a new sport: rugby. When I made the rugby team, I impressed myself because I had no prior knowledge of the rules of or how to play the game. The only thing I knew was what I had seen in movies, which was to run non-stop. Despite all the difficulties, rugby was a great way for me to meet new people and, as a bonus; our team won the championship, an even more impressive feat for a newcomer to the sport!

Adapting to and learning about new cultures has been part of the process of assimilating to this new country for me. Thus far, I haven't had problems adapting to new situations; in fact, I quite enjoy being the "new kid" because it always gives me the opportunity to learn and experience different things.

Overcoming difficulties of moving to a new place was not easy. Obstacles, such as leaving lifelong friends and acquiring new habits and tastes are surmountable. However, living in a new place also meant making new friendships and embracing new cultures, aspects that I've learnt to enjoy very much. Going on to university will be another challenge and a new opportunity for me to learn much more and experience tremendous personal growth.

Be rigorous, please!!
Thank You for the reviews!!
kevinyslin   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'Tetris' - Stanford Roommate [3]

Life is like a game of Tetris

really creative, its something that surely stands out
love the way you blend a game with your life

can you review mine too, thanks =)
kevinyslin   
Dec 21, 2011
Undergraduate / Stanford roommate essay: 'asian, born in Brazil and lives in Canada' [4]

Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better.

Dear future roommate,
I am thrilled to start a new part of our lives at Stanford, and I'm sure that you too are as excited. First of all let me introduce myself. I am not your typical Asian, I was born in Brazil and lived there most of my life, and recently I have moved to Canada. A bit weird eh?

Being from Brazil, I have always wanted to check out if what happened in the movies was real. Interestingly, some of my Canadian friends already became used to me saying: "is it just like in those movies?" A funny moment of those was when I first saw a Yellow School bus, since I thought they wouldn't exist in real life, and freaked out about it. In university I always imagined that line across the room, dividing the room into two very distinct spaces. I hope it never comes to that in our room.

I tend to learn things quickly, whether it is school related, or just fixing something on a computer. And if you ever require assistance, I assure you that I will always try to help you to my best extent, even if that means dropping what I am currently working on.

Also I have a great passion towards sports, I can adapt to different sports quickly. I admit I don't have the best body build (I may be the skinniest person you ever know); yet I got into the rugby team. And even though I got wrecked every rugby game, I love the thrill that the sport gives me.

Don't be worried if you expect a super messy room with clothes thrown all around and old food on the table. I tend to be clean and even have a habit of organizing everything. However, don't be alarmed if I start mumbling strange words in Portuguese from time to time or if I become overexcited because of a soccer game. Also if you were to become interested in learning a new language, I would gladly teach you. I look forward for these 4 years we will spend at Stanford

Regards, Kevin Lin

I appreciate the feedbacks
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