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psypsy   
Nov 30, 2008
Undergraduate / SAIC statement of purpose (animated films). Am on the right track? [15]

:( my situation is not bright either,,, :(... I'm an international student with a poor family so I won't go to SAIC or the other colleges unless I get scholarship.. It's sorta a gambling to apply all the colleges. I was just thinking about going back to my country but I really wanted to stay here and study art.
psypsy   
Nov 30, 2008
Undergraduate / SAIC statement of purpose (animated films). Am on the right track? [15]

omg...ME TOO!!..good luck for both of us. are you applying any other art college though? I'm applying Cooper (low chance haha) SVA MICA and Ringling.. I dunno. I'm just applying everywhere because I really need scholarship.. sorry about all the babbling but I haven't met any other applicant.. I got excited.. haha :)
psypsy   
Nov 29, 2008
Undergraduate / SAIC statement of purpose (animated films). Am on the right track? [15]

Hi I'm trying to write the same thing too!
Sorry that I'm not commenting.. but are you guys applying for undergraduate or graduate? cause undergraduate doesn't have any major or animation class right? :0 and Are you guys nominated for the merit?

Good luck!
psypsy   
Nov 28, 2008
Undergraduate / SAIC Personal statement - your personal vision [2]

Hi, this is for SAIC Personal Statement. I think I need a solid conclusion.. but I don't know how.. and is the introduction too.. aggressive? Please Help! Thank you :D

Your statement of purpose helps us find out more about your personal vision; Please tell us what your work is about.

My works are about the relationships between a mother and a child based on my own.
I hate my mom. My mom who gave me birth, suffered from my father's financial problem, and brought me and my other two siblings to this country with no money. She made me smile but also made me cry. She always stood behind me, loved me and supported me, but she also abused me with her hysteric mind.

Nevertheless, no matter how much I loathe her, she is my world. My body came out from her; I learned everything from her. It is a revolting truth that she is my mother, I am her daughter and we love each other. My world was built by her and still revolves around her. My mom forced me to move to a totally new world and reformed my life style into an insecure chaos, where I often found myself feeling trapped. However, she sacrificed herself to guide me into another world where I was able to find my dream of becoming an artist.

I want to show people how I think about my world through drawing, painting, sculpting, or creating an imaginary world. However, I don't want to stay in a comfort zone. Most of my works are based on the realistic figures, but I want to step out of that criteria and learn any new type of art that impact me: abstract, installation, fashion, film. I feel that most institutes' requirements to specialize in a "major" actually confine the mind and prevent it from truly grasping art as a concept. There are no boundaries for art; hence, I dream to become an artist who thinks outside the box and constantly innovates. I know that by attending SAIC, one of the nation's top schools, I will learn about every aspect of art with a faculty who inspires and interacts with the students: a group of mentors who can understand my artistic and mental capacities.

However, to accomplish my dream, there is one problem; I can't afford to attend an art school. As an international student, I need twice much as money to attain further education and make my living. The fact that I cannot even dream of attending an art school is devastating. I hope you will consider my financial problems - any form of scholarship will help me greatly to continue my education.
psypsy   
Nov 27, 2008
Undergraduate / After the lunch bell, I quickly stepped outside of Calculus, anxious to head to the Tomb. [3]

Thanks for the comments on prompt 2!
real story, need help!

After the lunch bell, I quickly stepped outside of Calculus, anxious to head to the Tomb. Let's see, I recounted in my head, It's Monet interpretation, so I probably need some vivid color paint and a couple of pieces of sketch paper. Walking about two minutes or so against the current of kids heading for the cafeteria, I arrived at the art room.

I headed to the corner of the room half blocked by a water fountain: The Tomb of Supplies. Pulling out the drawer, I found another collection of used drawing pads, cans of paint, brushes, etc. Not bad. From the pile of what others would call trash, I could salvage a few clean, unharmed pieces of paper, reusable palettes, and... Score: Almost half a can of fresh red paint! With a smile, I gathered my prizes for the day.

A cache of supplies that last year's seniors had left behind, the Tomb was where I headed almost every day for whatever I could not afford.

...
psypsy   
Nov 26, 2008
Undergraduate / UC prompt #2 - my academic experience [4]

Applying UCLA, moved to U.S 4years ago, majoring in art. Thank you!

Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

"But you don't understand!" Michelle groaned in exasperation, turning nearly crimson. "I really tried, but I guess I'm just not good at Korean. I mean, I literally spent hours trying to figure the verbs out, but I..." she sighed. "Just can't do it. You really can't understand; it's so hard for me."

I paused. Don't understand? Me? I asked myself; just how many times did I repeat those phrases-"I can't do it; I'm bad at this"-during my first few months in the U.S.? Having studied English for a few years in Korea, I was absolutely content with my basic understanding of the language until my family had to move to the U.S from financial troubles. And after my first week at the Pacific Lutheran High School, of which halls and classrooms contained not a single Korean soul, I was daunted to say the least. I remember my pitiful attempts at completing homework assignments, trying to understand the directions with a pen in one hand and an electronic dictionary in the other. Although I knew that learning English would be an enormous task, I was hopelessly lost. Since I had no idea what the directions said in the first place, I spent numerous nights repeatedly punching in letters into the dictionary and making flash cards of the words. Yet, despite my efforts, my analysis about Huckleberry Finn written in Korean and then translated into English not only sounded awkward but also was full of errors.

My academics wasn't the only thing that suffered from immigration; my social life ceased to exist from the lack of communication, and I was often left alone in the biology class during lunchtime. And day after day, I came to school to face others' teasing and dragged my tired body home for another pile of assignments and a whole lot of dictionary goodness. I wanted to give up, call it quits and return to Korea, where I was perfectly content with speaking the language I first learned.

However, as time went by, I began to actually remember some words that I previously searched for. My English still wasn't perfect, freckled with glitches and misused idioms, but it definitely improved. And after a while, I was fluent in English and Korean, which led me to TA at my church's Korean school, where I tutored many elementary school students, including Michelle.

And now watching Michelle take leaps and bounds from when she was struggling with the alphabet and teach Korean to other kids makes me wonder what I would have become without the experience of living in a whole new environment and learning a new language. Only through exposure struggles that accompanied the first few months at the school, I could have learned to be fearless in whatever I try. Instead of shutting off myself from others' criticism or fearing failure, I made a decision to stay in the school and challenge myself. And the experience taught me how to find true happiness, not lazy contentment. Exposure to pain and adversity, in turn, helped me appreciate life.
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