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mnsstudbewerb Apr 2, 2012
mnsstudbewerb Apr 2, 2012
Letters /
'a person who wants to be success' - Motivation Letter for MBA [3]
Hi , some suggestions :
"I had a chance to work with people
that come ..."
whta do you mean by the way by : "except for that " ??
"I
had had more than 6 years..." without using contractions , and with contractions ---> "I'
d had more than 6 years ..."
"...and then
a UK based MNC..."
"...in the
administration function ..."
"..and confidence
of my co-workers ..."
mnsstudbewerb Mar 31, 2012
mnsstudbewerb Mar 30, 2012
mnsstudbewerb Mar 29, 2012
Letters /
A friend of mine had a significant influence on me [5]
until now I still remember a friend of mine that let me explore my potentials and capabilities. His way of thinking and reasoning was really amazing , as he made me change my view of seeing things many times . Unfortunately, he left the school after the death of his father, and had to work as a food seller to feed himself and the family. But later he picked up his studies and became a very successful professional. His advice to me was set high goals, I never forgot it and try to live with it every day.
mnsstudbewerb Mar 29, 2012
mnsstudbewerb Mar 29, 2012
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