mnsstudbewerb
Apr 2, 2012
Scholarship / 'Not just a financially disadvantaged girl from a middle class family' - scholarship [8]
hi, some suggestions :
"..eagerly aspired to study abroad...."
"I am strongly able to ???? " ---> able to what ??
"..I am much prepared for ..."
for "regarding theirs" i am thinking to remove it, but I am not sure about it
good luck
hi, some suggestions :
"..eagerly aspired to study abroad...."
"I am strongly able to ???? " ---> able to what ??
"..I am much prepared for ..."
for "regarding theirs" i am thinking to remove it, but I am not sure about it
good luck