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mclite77   
Apr 12, 2012
Graduate / 'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education [12]

I continued the path in teaching students with disabilities as a Paraprofessional. I had accepted wider variety of roles than before. Although, this assignment did not require any specific sets of responsibilities, it had a particular role. I worked with a student on an individual basis conducting the uses of different teaching techniques that were introduced to me. The techniques I had learned became an added influence towards my interest to work with children in a greater extent. As a result, I had delivered something good to the student's needs. It provoked a positive impact in the child's progress days after. I grew to love the profession and I felt that teaching was part of me.

Can anyone make comments or edits on this paragraph, please.
mclite77   
Apr 10, 2012
Graduate / 'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education [12]

At the age of nine, I had to take on the responsibilities of a guardian, a mentor, and a teacher to my sister. I had to accept the roles due to the fact that my mother had told me that from here on end, your cousins will not be living with us anymore. I came to acknowledge the fact my future goals will be changing later on in time.

Unemployed Saw a wanted ad with a description of, Individual who enjoys working with children, able to multi-task, and doesn't mind working with children who are challenged. Yet, that was me. For get business, I was done with the business world. I rather have the long hours in a school building than in an office cubicle.

I began preparing for a career as a Teacher's Assistant at NSSED. My primary responsibilities were maintaining discipline and assisting students with difficulties. One of the ways I kept order in the classroom is to engage the students enthusiastically. Through my student - teacher interaction, I was able to create a dynamic connection with the students to make their learning a much more entertaining process rather a perplexing thought. I came to like the work I conduct at NSSED because it touched my spirit as a teacher, taught me to asses different situations while staying in poised, and grabbed my attention at all times. As an added (how do you say when someone wants to volunteer more of their time in other works than just there duties) I moved on to participate in outsourcing projects that help students make use of team building strategies. I employ most of my past sporting techniques in application to providing assistance to students with social disorder.

I continued the path in teaching students with disabilities as a Paraprofessional at Wilson. It was in this employment that I found my true passion for education. My responsibilities in conducting I accepted an even wider variety of roles than before. My one-to-one assignment with a student provided me with a direct insight to the different uses of teaching techniques that were introduced to me. One of the greatest techniques I treasure through this assignment was the practical use of "manding" for non verbal interactions. It was a true marvel in that after a series of sequential trials, the student gained true understanding of the concept. I was motivated to provide "manding" tasks to improve the students' performance skill. I was working with a student on a task and after a period of time, I looked at the clock, it ws time for lunch. That three hours of work session felt like it was only 3 minutes. I enjoyed it.

It was a rewarding sight to see that through good techniques and teacher motivation, a student could learn.

Eventually, I grew to love teaching children with developmental disabilities and financial difficulties. In my forgoing effort to provide a good environment for each student, I also have placed a great emphasis towards the understanding of special needs of a student under the umbrella of Autism. The main point of being a teacher is to attend to the student's needs in the presence of an instruction, for immediate assistance. It's through these experiences that I see a vision in me that precisely depict the true nature of my purpose to teach.

Upon completion of the education program at the University, I plan acquire a multitude of educational strategies while gaining literacy in all areas of education. As part of my short term goals, this include gaining additional knowledge base in social behavior issues and techniques, getting exposure to urban school setting for experience, and gaining additional foundations in the field of education.
mclite77   
Apr 9, 2012
Graduate / 'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education [12]

Greetings Alisher,

Wow, thank you for providing me with those question. I never taught to look at it that way. It DID HELP. A LOT. I am so glad you had the chance to read it. I'm not A++ writer, but as nerdy as it sounds, I want to be. I will repose an edited version soon. Hope you get to read it again for another check up on errors or vague usage of language.

Oh, is the essay below much better by sound than the essay above?

:)
mclite77   
Apr 9, 2012
Graduate / Philosophy on Education (experimental essay for submission) [3]

Greetings Susan,

Thank you for taking the time to look at my essay above.

Often, I forget grammar rules and verb tense as I write. My tendency is to write out my initial though from my head within 20 minutes. As we all know, perfect writing doesn't come as easy for some of us in 20 minutes. I wish I have that talent.

In relation to the edits you have provided for me, you have good sight for grammar. I glad you have the chance to take a look at my writing piece. Is that jargon, or should I say written essay. Is my writing style terrible? I believe my writing style is so elusive, especially my sentence structure. I speak somewhat in the same manner. I do think, after talking, I enter this zone much like the elite class in cocktail party talk. lol. It is so formal that I'm starting to think its autism. LOL.

Once again, thank you. I hope this short response was free from grammar errors. I'm starting to become a crazy grammar freak.

Michael :)
mclite77   
Apr 8, 2012
Undergraduate / "Problems can become opportunities" - essay [4]

To sum up all, it can be concluded that I am interested in International Management and am planning the career of an international manager. I have decided to continue my education in the Japan and would be glad if you can provide me with one.
mclite77   
Apr 8, 2012
Graduate / 'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education [12]

At the age of nine, I had to take on the responsibilities of a guardian, a mentor, and a teacher both to my sister. I had to accept the roles due to the fact that my mother had told me that from here on end, your cousins will not be living with us anymore. I came to acknowledge the fact my future goals will be changing later on in time.

Eventually, I grew to love teaching children with developmental disabilities and financial difficulties.

I began preparing for a career as a teacher's assistant at NSSED. My primary responsibilities were maintaining discipline and assisting students with difficulties. One of the ways I kept order in the classroom is to engage the students enthusiastically. Through my student - teacher interaction, I was able to create a dynamic connection with the students to make their learning a much more entertaining process rather a perplexing thought. I became involved in outsourcing projects that help students make use of team building strategies. I employ most of my past sporting techniques in application to providing assistance to students with social disorder.

I continued the path in teaching students with disabilities as a paraprofessional at Wilson. It was in this employment that I found my true passion for education. I accepted an even wider variety of roles than before. My one-to-one assignment with a student provided me with a direct insight to the different uses of teaching techniques that were introduced to me. One of the greatest techniques I treasure through this assignment was the practical use of "manding" for non verbal interactions. It was a true marvel in that after a series of sequential trials, the student gained true understanding of the concept. I was motivated to provide "manding" tasks to improve the students' performance skill. It was a rewarding sight to see that through good techniques and teacher motivation, a student could learn.

In my forgoing effort to provide a good environment for each student, I also have placed a great emphasis towards the understanding of special needs of a student under the umbrella of Autism.

Upon completion of the education program at the University, I plan acquire a multitude of educational strategies while gaining literacy in all areas of education. As part of my short term goals, this include gaining additional knowledge base in social behavior issues and techniques, getting exposure to urban school setting for experience, and gaining additional foundations in the field of education.

As a long term goal, I plan to advance my position as a teacher assistant to a certified teacher with provisional requirements in the State of New York.

Here is an edit of the essay fro above.
mclite77   
Apr 8, 2012
Graduate / Need help in making SOP for Postgraduate Diploma in Management [4]

First, you might want to write out why you want to get an MBA. List in one page just those reasons, post it on your wall and keep reading it to a week. Its like meditation. Then go back take the next week to write out the why? under all those headings.
mclite77   
Apr 8, 2012
Graduate / Philosophy on Education (experimental essay for submission) [3]

My Philosophy on Education is the belief that the passion to learn, the commitment to succeed, and the motivation to try, is the passage through the core values that a teacher instills to a student, as learning becomes a way of guidance that encourages pupils to improve. It is an educator's duty to provide an environment that exhibits a multitude of ways for children to engage in the process of learning.

When I was a young child, I always wanted to show people the things I have learned through my family, friends, manuals, and teachers. Then, I entered the field of teaching, where I was able to present to an audience of children, various techniques in reading, writing, and arithmetic under the auspices of the head teacher. Let alone, I wanted to help those whom where much more challenge than others. This interest has catapulted me towards the beginning of my career in education.

The journey through my past experiences as a teacher assistant foreshadowed my teaching styles. Under the auspices of the certified staff, I was given the opportunity to work in a population that requires an extra bit of patience. In formulating my approach to each class lesson, there was a need to implement hands-on learning as the basis for each work session. An adulating engagement with the student, while promoting encouragement, and confidence in taking tasks has its role in part with the learning process. Once the student becomes self sufficient, then the teaching has effectively accomplish its role.

Furthermore, the importance of a teacher making assessments on a student's capabilities is vital to facilitating education. In the successful grasping of an academic material and its content, being able to have rapport with the students to gain better understanding of their capabilities should intertwine directly with each learning style.

Fostering a positive teaching environment requires that the student receives an invitation to participate in a friendly atmosphere. As a proclamation, there should be willingness for each student to express themselves with an utmost pride towards their work and success.

In conclusion, my goal as a teacher is to provide to in each and every student with the necessary skills and knowledge so they could succeed on their own. I want to leave a memory of myself as teacher who was not afraid to roll up the sleeves to help another student in any way and influenced others to do the right thing. My colleagues recall me a teacher who regularly participates and who was active to contribute assistance to the school community.
mclite77   
Apr 7, 2012
Graduate / 'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education [12]

Thanks Jiya for taking the time to read my essay.

When you wrote all those sentences, I found I threw million of ideas in different directions. I didn't really followed my outline, but somehow, I was able to write more without it.

Can you tell me if the essay is in good grammar form? Did it flow well?
mclite77   
Apr 7, 2012
Writing Feedback / IELTS (no country can progress without the co-operation of other countries) [6]

Your topic was to talk about nations. But in your essay you mentioned countries. I suggest to use nations not countries to give your essay one clear area to talk about.

Another suggestion is to pick two nations to talk about in your paragraphs. Then give at least one or two descriptive points.
mclite77   
Apr 6, 2012
Graduate / 'preparing for this career' - Statement of Purpose - Grad. School in Education [12]

Need help. Below is an essay and a given topic. Please provide any suggestions or comments for editing and improvements.

The statement of purpose is a double-spaced, two to three page statement explaining your purpose in undertaking graduate study in your particular program. This is your opportunity to introduce yourself and to inform the Admissions Committee about your goals, interests, and career plans as they relate to your intended academic pursuits.

Twenty years ago, when I came home from school, my mother was at the door waiting for me, to deliver a message that changed my line of work today: Your cousins won't be back at the apartment anymore. It's just you and your sister with us. Then and there, I had to take the responsibility of becoming a guardian, a mentor, and a teacher to my sister. Later on, my father stepped forward to say that my aunts, his cousins whom I will be meeting soon are Autistic. My six years in the field of education has ascertained my commitment to teach. Welcoming my interest to teach children, who are academically challenged and underprivileged in some areas, has risen to become my greatest passion.

I began preparing for this career as a teacher assistant at NSSED. Primarily, my achievement during this teaching term was resourced on the need to dispense the use of consistent prompts as an impermanent solution to keep each student routinely on their task daily. This strategy has become a fundamental element to my skill in achieving a way to motivate each student. I tackled to monitor the students' progress during in class assignments and completed various instructional duties in collaboration with staff or myself alone. Immersed with the variety of assignments I had accepted, I did not feel overwhelmed, but more as rewarded. Knowing that at the end of the day that each student learned better ways to work with out disruptions, that was my prided work.

For a short period of time, I have departed away from the instructional setting to another field that was less formal. My job involved performing home base coaching and tutoring that included child care duties. It included some academic assistance at a smaller scale. I spent my summer days coaching a thirteen year old with his pitching while helping a seven year old with some reading. I would read books to help the six year old learn new words and vocabulary. Surely, five boxes of markers and an array of post it notes used on a write board for vocabulary jeopardy was a marvel.

In my present position as Paraprofessional at Wilson, my primary role was to assist the certified teacher in the classroom. More so, I dealt with making intangible task into tangible task. They ranged from teaching basic math to word order form as well as bead stringing for fine motor. One of the best techniques that I had was to dispense error correction procedures to reduce total number of resulting mistakes on a student's performance. When student A completes a series of puzzle sets, an error happens, I precede with modifications on the spot that will ___ student A for a better understanding of the material preceding that error correction. Imperative as it is, I ascertain the students' needs as it captures preferences recommended for the teacher to address towards their academic needs. These uses of various styles to the approach of class instruction really stimulate my desires to delve into teaching.

Advancing my knowledge in education in pursuit of my academic goals is due partly of my experiences and passion. Distinctively, I wish to use this knowledge to enhance the classroom environment with an application of today's current developments in teaching techniques.

The curriculum for the Master's program would allow me to be more acquainted in the field. This will allow me to see different ways I could develop more techniques. I like the field work requirements in the program as this will allow me to foster new ideas for future development of an academic lesson.

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