Writing Feedback / Spanking kids isn't all good [3]

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Spanking children has been a practice for many centuries.Infact,it is hard to imagine a time when children were not punished for antisocial behavior.However, for all the good spanking may do,there are harmful results from this practice as well.Some of the harmful side effects of physical punishment can be violence,emotionally stress and misunderstanding.

First,violence is the most harmful effect of this action.It urges the children to do bad things against their parents.Parents should understand their child's condition and try to figure out what the problem is.If it is continousely happens,children hate their parents as well as their teachers too.

Second,this type of actions may lead the children to emotionally stressed and tired.The fact is they can't really behave normal even at home.

Third,misunderstanding is also another effect of spanking kids.They built bad images on particular people,those they hate.this may caused to become an antisocial in the society.

They can't faces the society with courage and trust.

To sumup,if we want to spanking them,first we should talk with them in abetter way.It would be a better way to communicate and understand them throughly.

Writing Feedback / Common Forms of Fraud [2]

Common Forms of Fraud

We are living in a world full of crime. Man is ready to do anything for his survival. In that case fraud comes first. Fraud is illegal. It can be done for personal gain or to damage another individual. Nowadays , there are many forms of fraud such as: auction fraud, financial fraud, identity fraud, software piracy, and lottery fraud. Among them, software piracy, auction fraud, and identity fraud are considered as most important forms of frauds.

A major form of fraud is software piracy, which is recognized as a major threat to the software industry. Software piracy is unauthorized copying or distribution of copyrighted software. This can be done by copying, downloading, sharing, selling, or installing multiple copies on to personal or work computers. It costs the industry billions.

Another important form is auction fraud. Most of these are based on the Internet. Internet auction fraud occurs in several ways but most common is the failure to deliver the purchased item. On the other hand, 'betting' also occurs with auction fraud. People from around the world bet on particular teams but they don't know who is managing this trade. At last they are cheated.

Finally, the identity fraud is the serious form of frauds. It can be done many ways such as: stealing credit card number, security number , and stealing financial resources. For example identity fraud may occur when someone steals personal information, opens a credit card account without permission. In most of the countries identity fraud considered as a federal crime.

To sum up, we have to be careful about these frauds. If we don't be aware of this type of situations, we'll be the victim.