Posts by Archu

Archu

Jun 13, 2012

Writing Feedback / 'going to live once' - IELTS: worst diet [6]

The points that you have mentioned on your essay is perfect but the way that you have presented is quite wrong.
As we see the ielts essay samples, they always have an intro,3-4 paras of views and ideas relating to it and conclusion.Basically, it gives the examiner a clear structure as well the flow.So plan it before you writing the task

Spellings are also very important in ielts writing as there is chance of losing the score for spelling mistakes.

Good luck with ur exams.

Archu

Jun 13, 2012

Writing Feedback / IELTS task .Expaining why you want to take IELTS exam [10]

I would recommend to start the introduction like, that your ambition is to become a doctor and the reasons behind it and then explain it in brief manner why you need to do it in foreign countries.

The question is why we want to take ielts exam ?
so we have to put forward the reasons why we have to take it.
You can say it is one of the main requirement of the universities as well as the for the immigration.They basically check for the requirements in order to make sure whether we ca survive, study and work in english speaking countries without much difficulties.

You can write about the listening, speaking, reading and writing test.How it going to help you and etc.

Hope it helps.

Good luck for your exams.

Archu

Jun 2, 2012

Writing Feedback / 'Internet has exceeded the newspapers demand' - IELTS writing [5]

With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Things have been changed since from twentieth century. Internet plays a vital role in everyone's life. Now days it is hard to live a life without a net connection. On one side, the progress of web is going well while on the other side, the number of newsreaders is getting declined day by day. Personally, I inclined to agree with the views that web has surpasses the newspapers.

Internet is connecting almost all parts of the world. Information has been updated every time. Whether it is a heart breaking or sensational news, we can get in a web within a matter of second. So people prefer to use Internet instead of buying newspapers. As we all know the above features are not presented in newspapers, so a big drawback.

Technology has been improved more and makes the communication faster the ever. Due to the available of cheap smart phones and loads of free mobile applications, the information is retrieved quicker. Like sports, financial rates, top headlines, politics and etc. An important drawback is a newspaper does not give the information in detail but the web in turn illustrates it in detail.

Another reason is, while taking the environment in to consideration. It is time to think of the topic deforestation. The more the papers the more the trees are cut down. So it is better to save trees for our future generations to make them live happy.

In conclusion, I agree that Internet has exceeded the newspapers demand. Though it might be unpleasant to see the absence of newspapers in the future but in turn we will save some trees for our future lives.